Shadow Boxing

Aug 13, 2009 17:52

Title: Shadow Boxing
Word count: ~5,100
Characters: Sheppard, Beckett, brief appearances by others
Warnings: spoilers for Season 5's Whispers
Summary: Episode tag to Whispers - what could possibly be worse than genetically mutated Zombies ( Read more... )

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ga_unicorn August 14 2009, 01:08:30 UTC
Having suffered through a really bad bout of pneumonia, I have to say that your descriptions of what Sheppard was going through brought back some vivid memories. Very well done, a nice bit of whump. So happy you discovered where it was hiding. ;-)

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coolbreeze1 August 14 2009, 03:03:36 UTC
That makes me so happy to hear!! Er...not happy that you had pneumonia; happy that the descriptions rang true. I'm always a little nervous about medical stuff, no matter how often I write it. Thanks for reading!

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obsessed1o1 August 14 2009, 01:18:32 UTC
Oh lovely. I really enjoyed reading this! John's fight and getting sick and being able to get a glimpse at the other team members from Whispers. I always thought that episode needed a tag and here it is! Lovely and orginal! Thanks for writing this!

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coolbreeze1 August 14 2009, 03:04:22 UTC
Thank you!! Glad I found this story. It might have hidden itself away on the hard drive for years... :D

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wraithfodder August 14 2009, 01:26:46 UTC
Oooh, nice good whumpy fic :) ANd yes, whispers deserved a better ending (well, it deserved to be a better episode) ;)

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coolbreeze1 August 14 2009, 03:05:43 UTC
Thank you!! There was so much whump potential in that ep...

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wraithfodder August 16 2009, 02:09:44 UTC
Heh, I'd love to see the whole episode rewritten!

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syble4 August 14 2009, 01:53:29 UTC
Made my chest hurt, nicely done. Always love a good sick Shep.

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coolbreeze1 August 14 2009, 03:06:02 UTC
Thanks! I love sick!Shep myself. ;)

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black_raven135 August 14 2009, 01:54:36 UTC
Poor darlin', bedridden and nothing he can do about it.......
Men are such poor patients......especially when they're LTCOLs.......
:P
Great story......

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coolbreeze1 August 14 2009, 03:06:35 UTC
Thank you! Although to be fair to Sheppard, Sergeant Mehra was not a very good patient either. ;P

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black_raven135 August 14 2009, 03:53:42 UTC
I know, but she is not as fun to tease
as Sheppard..
:P

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