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[pmntmrkrwrtng]

Ok, first time posting ANYTHING....it's just a quick little angsty poem thing. *hides under computer desk*

It's sweat and frustration
Passion and melding
Hands gripping and voices rising
It's writhing and sorrow
Bliss and Armageddon
Legs straining and voices hushed
It's bruises and enlightenment
Greed and impulsion
Lips touching and voices choked

Comments

[silvia]

I thought "Passion and melding" & "Greed and impulsion" were great.

This is our first Cookstro poem.

Cookstroem, if you will.

[pmntmrkrwrtng]

Aw, thank you!!

Really?! Maybe it'll be a new craze...

[hatemetoday_xx]

It's bruises and enlightenment
I really liked that line.

Great job <33

[pmntmrkrwrtng]

Thank you very much! :D

[insanityxspeaks]

Bliss and Armageddon & It's bruises and enlightenment
^^These were my favorite lines, but the whole thing was really so passionate and angsty. I liked it. A lot. <3 I really loved the ending too xDD

<333333

[pmntmrkrwrtng]

*flails around* THANK YOU!!

I was so nervous about posting this XD

[ovidien]

YOU POSTED IT!!!

peer pressure does work =D

[pmntmrkrwrtng]

I DID!!

What can I say? Im weak :P

[aligning_stars]

oh my gosh i love this! its beautiful!!!

[pmntmrkrwrtng]

*squees* THANK YOU! :D