Title: Song Choice 2/12 (David Cook- Billie Jean)
Author: Starbrigid
Pairing: David Cook/Jason Castro, implied David Cook/Michael Johns
Rating: R
Summary: "Be careful who you love."
Disclaimer: If only it were true.
Author's Note: Hello all! -waves- Nice to meet you! -poke poke-
This is the second part of a planned "epic" lol which will just like go
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yes, your characterisations are perfect. absolutely perfect. i enjoy some inner turmoil. and jason's impatience. so awesome! well done. thank you for posting it <3
i also particularly enjoy how it focusses on the actual situation and doesn't teeter off onto 'i love you's, because that would be kinda unrealistic, but no, it all fits rather wonderfully. how you describe everything going through in david's mind and the fact that you know nothing else is going on in jason's other than what's happening now, even without it being described. does that make sense? probably not. it's early. well. love love <3
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that was amazing. <33
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