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story #1
once there was a boy named Domingo. Yes, he was, indeed, mexican. he liked rice and chicken. so one day he ate chicken and he noticed a fly buzzing, annoyingly, around the lamp directly above his head. He asked the fly 'what are you doing up there' the fly didnt answer so he stood on his chair and became eye to eye with the buzzing fly he repeated his question "what are you doing up here???" when the fly didnt answer he became very offened, and soon extremly angry. his heart started pumping, his blood rushing, his eyes became squinted he yelped in pain as razor sharp talons pertuded from his hands replacing his finger nails. Fur soon took the place of his dark mexican hair.he howled as his mexican mommy came running into the kitchen "donde esta la ropa interorita de mi novia" Yes, he was turning into a warewolf. But how? no moon. just a fly. his mommy wondered what had happened to her poor little domingo as she was being knawed on by a warewolf which she though was a wild dog. So next time you are being knawed on by wild dogs.. its probably just a hungry mexican warewolf. beware adn watch out for flys or you too might turn into a warewolf.
Story #2 ( written wayyyy after story #1 and completly stealing the essence of #1)
There once was a boy named Pepe and Pepe like pizzza..But the bad thing was that Pepe was mexican not italian..even though his name sounds italian..Anyways Pepe's parents were mad at Pepe when he ate pizza..they believed he was going against his mexican heritagee..because on top of eating Pizza Pepe didnt eat tacos like all the other little mexican boys doo..Pepe's parents were begginning to become furious..So they callled in the ............................
Mexican Mofia...THE mexican mofia was bad newwss they were some of the scariest mexicans..every mexican would fear at the sound of there namee..it was heart piercing when ever the mexican mofia was mentioned...So they told Pepe that he had to stopp eating pizza and eat tacos like a good little mexican boyy or he would have to wear a rainbow speedo for the rest of his lifee...so Pepe eventually gave in and gave upp pizza..and that is why you will never find pizza in mexico
.... SO until next Adios Muchachos...And the legend of ZORRO WILL RETURN Z
story #1
once there was a boy named Domingo. Yes, he was, indeed, mexican. he liked rice and chicken. so one day he ate chicken and he noticed a fly buzzing, annoyingly, around the lamp directly above his head. He asked the fly 'what are you doing up there' the fly didnt answer so he stood on his chair and became eye to eye with the buzzing fly he repeated his question "what are you doing up here???" when the fly didnt answer he became very offened, and soon extremly angry. his heart started pumping, his blood rushing, his eyes became squinted he yelped in pain as razor sharp talons pertuded from his hands replacing his finger nails. Fur soon took the place of his dark mexican hair.he howled as his mexican mommy came running into the kitchen "donde esta la ropa interorita de mi novia" Yes, he was turning into a warewolf. But how? no moon. just a fly. his mommy wondered what had happened to her poor little domingo as she was being knawed on by a warewolf which she though was a wild dog. So next time you are being knawed on by wild dogs.. its probably just a hungry mexican warewolf. beware adn watch out for flys or you too might turn into a warewolf.
Story #2 ( written wayyyy after story #1 and completly stealing the essence of #1)
There once was a boy named Pepe and Pepe like pizzza..But the bad thing was that Pepe was mexican not italian..even though his name sounds italian..Anyways Pepe's parents were mad at Pepe when he ate pizza..they believed he was going against his mexican heritagee..because on top of eating Pizza Pepe didnt eat tacos like all the other little mexican boys doo..Pepe's parents were begginning to become furious..So they callled in the ............................
Mexican Mofia...THE mexican mofia was bad newwss they were some of the scariest mexicans..every mexican would fear at the sound of there namee..it was heart piercing when ever the mexican mofia was mentioned...So they told Pepe that he had to stopp eating pizza and eat tacos like a good little mexican boyy or he would have to wear a rainbow speedo for the rest of his lifee...so Pepe eventually gave in and gave upp pizza..and that is why you will never find pizza in mexico
.... SO until next Adios Muchachos...And the legend of ZORRO WILL RETURN Z