DW Fic: Second Time Around (7/8ish)

Feb 05, 2010 16:54

Second Time Around

By: cookie2697
Rating: R
Characters/Pairing: Ten/Rose; John Smith/Rose
Beta: lorelaisquared
Setting: AU Human Nature, with a twist.

Author’s Note: Apologies for being a few days late again. This week got away from me a bit. This chapter was a struggle for me, and I'm still not entirely happy with it, but everyone who has read it seems okay with ( Read more... )

writing, doctor who, fanfic

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catyuy February 6 2010, 01:42:40 UTC
I second the above comment

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cookie2697 February 6 2010, 04:51:40 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad it worked for you too!

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gypsyariana February 6 2010, 04:54:38 UTC
Thirded!

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cookie2697 February 6 2010, 05:04:03 UTC
hee! Thanks!

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cookie2697 February 6 2010, 04:50:55 UTC
*hugs you*

WHY NOT!? I think it just felt unnatural to me. I sat down to write this chapter with one goal: they needed to kiss by the end of the chapter. But it had to be an unnaturally instigated kiss. And it just felt FORCED to me while I was writing it. And I think it's a little cliche too. But I'm glad y'all like it! I was having nightmares of public outcry at my one crappy chapter. So I'm glad I'm the only one who hates it so far ;) Yay!

Awwww! Don't be scared! What's there to be scared of? I'm really a nice person! I swear! *pats you on the shoulder*

Thanks for the lovely comments. As always they mean SO much to me!!

I will do my utmost best to not be late with Chapter 8! (hee! That rhymes!) But seeing as I'll be out of town this weekend, I suspect I won't get a chance to start working on 8 until at least Monday :( Which would be on-schedule posting. So let's see what Monday brings me!

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