Journal Entry 5.1
So, today has been an uneventful day, thank god. I've needed at least half a day to myself to collect my thoughts and move on to all the tasks at hand. One of those tasks is tempering my song. I have an idea for an edit to verse one, tell me what you all think.
:::BEFORE:::
(Verse 1)(Beat Pattern 1 - Broken Slower Rock Flow)
Over the city, affecting all life,
A darkness rises and cuts like a knife.
Destroys everyone standing at bey,
What will you do when it comes your way?
:::AFTER:::
(Verse 1)(Beat Pattern 1 - Broken Slower Rock Flow)
Over the city, affecting all life,
A darkness rises and cuts like a knife.
Destroys everyone that stands in it's way,
What will you do when it makes you it's prey?
Well, tell me what you all think. Like I said, till it's recorded it's not finished and I don't even guarentee that much. lol ;-) To all, have a happy Easter and I'll see most of you before the weekend is over. Till next time, and until we meet again, may he hold you in his hand...
:::BEFORE:::
(Verse 1)(Beat Pattern 1 - Broken Slower Rock Flow)
Over the city, affecting all life,
A darkness rises and cuts like a knife.
Destroys everyone standing at bey,
What will you do when it comes your way?
:::AFTER:::
(Verse 1)(Beat Pattern 1 - Broken Slower Rock Flow)
Over the city, affecting all life,
A darkness rises and cuts like a knife.
Destroys everyone that stands in it's way,
What will you do when it makes you it's prey?
Well, tell me what you all think. Like I said, till it's recorded it's not finished and I don't even guarentee that much. lol ;-) To all, have a happy Easter and I'll see most of you before the weekend is over. Till next time, and until we meet again, may he hold you in his hand...