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Homecoming, HP, R/S, PG

Sep 15, 2003 21:11

Homecoming
By: yeatsRated: PG ( Read more... )

Comments 17

shezan September 15 2003, 18:21:31 UTC

Ooooo, sniffle, sniffle, sniffle. Why am I terrified it's too good to be true, even though you, and Sirius, tell us to accept this good fortune? Because you're a fine writer, that's why. Lovely, delicate, just-pitched-right vignette.

Shezan
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leici September 15 2003, 19:10:10 UTC

Oh, yay! I loved this! So happy to have Sirius back. And I like the way you just focused on the reunion and not on the means. Brilliant.

kit_maxel September 15 2003, 19:59:53 UTC

so. insanely. beautifully. perfect.

read it a few minutes ago, and I only just now realized I wasn't breathing and that's probly why I couldn't write a decent review. for some reason I really liked the line about the biscuits...

yeats September 16 2003, 12:12:29 UTC

Yes, so the biscuit line was actually something I'd been toying with for awhile; it finally made its debut here and I'm glad it did.

And while getting positive reviews is always nice, it's even better when they're from people with rent icons.

kit_maxel September 17 2003, 19:15:52 UTC

^_^ RENT rocks.

yeats September 17 2003, 19:22:43 UTC

It definitely does.... Which Roger is that?

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silentfire September 15 2003, 20:13:28 UTC

thank you. *thank* you.

siresin September 15 2003, 20:21:31 UTC

Just, lovely. <3
Nicely written and in-character, and the dialogue worked really well. Loved the line about it making Snape's day.