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IMPROV: The Boy Who Cried Wolf

Jan 02, 2003 20:50

TITLE: The Boy Who Cried Wolf
IMPROV: "Addiction". I might have scraped in there, just.
NOTES: Um, buh? What the hell have I just written? It appears to be rather mild femslash. I didn't know I had it in me. I blame Megolas for this one.

DISCLAIMER: Pure fiction.
( Fun things to do with chocolate... )

motto, cblanchett

Comments 5

YIKES! cupiscent January 2 2003, 02:50:02 UTC

Oh, I'm a bad girl. I feel so sheepish. I didn't read the challenge properly. Like, the part where Zarah specifically stated that no use of the word 'addiction' was allowed.

*hides in shame*

Re: YIKES! azewewish January 2 2003, 09:56:46 UTC

Ha!

Who cares, you slashed Cate!!! *kisses you*

octopussy January 3 2003, 19:21:57 UTC

Yay, very nice.

Not much up for femslash/RPS, but it definitely worked for me. A nice set up, even a story in 45 minutes of ficcing. You get a gold star!

*appreciates*

gabbyhope January 3 2003, 19:46:18 UTC

Oh, pshaw, with the slip of you using the word... I'll let it slide. *winks* The fic more than makes up for it.

You wrote Cate! Cate! Yes! Very yummy. I understand the whole fixation with chocolate entirely too well (I have a t-shirt that says, 'chocolate makes my clothes shrink', but anyway...) and this was just utter funfunfun. Orli as voyeur? Rawrrr. Very sexy.

Femslash I'm still new to, but I could definitely see more of it. Stop corrupting me, Dee. *wags a finger in your direction*

mmm... chocolate...

bexone January 4 2003, 20:59:32 UTC

he blinked frantically, trying to figure out if he was just having one of those dreams again
This made me laugh. I mean, doesn't *everyone* have sexually suggestive dreams involving Mir and Cate?

Er, um, maybe that's just me. ::grins::

I like the back and forth between them; it's a meeting of equals. Makes me happy. And I love the Voyeur!Orli POV. Although I find it hard to believe that Orli is *ever* that sexually deprived, unless it's some sort of voluntary self-denial thing. The boy has pulling power in his little finger ;)

Now, I like a nice lesbian fantasy as much as the next young male
::snort:: another funny. :)

Anyway, eee! Mir/Cate! Chocolate! Go you!