Comments | contrelamontre: Nicotine, Lotrips, Elijah/Viggo, PG

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Nicotine, Lotrips, Elijah/Viggo, PG

Jan 01, 2003 23:09

Title: Nicotine
Author: inbetweens
Rating: PG
Pairing: Elijah/Viggo
Disclaimer: Fiction. Characters are actually Real People who would probably be offended by reading this.
Notes: Written for this challenge.
( Nicotine. )

viggo, lij

Comments 10

caras_galadhon January 2 2003, 00:05:38 UTC

a passing outside of Costumes that would be almost spiritual if Viggo didn't look as if he'd gotten into a fight with a hurricane. And won.

*LOL* Oh, I like that line.

Frost-sucked rather than bitten. That's how cold really is. Draws a finger into its mouth and pulls, leeches warmth out with its tongue rather than its teeth.

Very nice description. Really made me feel the cold. Lovely.

inbetweens January 2 2003, 13:57:06 UTC

Hee, thank you.

piran January 2 2003, 02:34:06 UTC

Why does that story sound so familiar?
Is it because I bite my nails, and smoke, and... hehe.

Great! I love it. Wonderful description of... practically everything.

inbetweens January 2 2003, 14:11:22 UTC

Why does that story sound so familiar?
Is it because I bite my nails, and smoke, and... hehe.

...and you probably wouldn't mind touching Viggo, yourself? ;)

Thank you!

piran January 2 2003, 20:43:20 UTC

...and you probably wouldn't mind touching Viggo, yourself?

Right. :-) Who wouldn't?

gabbyhope January 2 2003, 07:55:42 UTC

And if he does watch, it's only because... Um, because frostbite has suddenly developed sex appeal.

Fantastic. Improv successful; addiction well carried out. And I never really know what to think of when it comes to Viggo most of the time, but there is this sort of... charm you've saddled onto him. *I* want to reach out and touch his cold fingers and the like, because of how Elijah views it. Rawr. Wonderful, wonderful job.

inbetweens January 2 2003, 14:06:55 UTC

Improv successful

Woo-hoo! *does victory dance* Thanks.

azrhiaz January 2 2003, 10:30:52 UTC

Well, *yay*! There should certainly be more Viggo/Elijah, and when it's this well done...gah.

You capture the cold brilliantly, and lines like this:

Prickling little waves of pain, hissing like static, incessant reminders of the cold.

-- crackle and hiss with their own electricity. Very nicely done, indeed. :)

inbetweens January 2 2003, 14:08:53 UTC

There should definitely be more Viggo/Elijah. Mmm, the possibilites.

And thanks so much, love!

octopussy January 4 2003, 11:44:51 UTC

Very, very nice response to the challenge. I like where you went with it.