Title: Nicotine Author: inbetweens Rating: PG Pairing: Elijah/Viggo Disclaimer: Fiction. Characters are actually Real People who would probably be offended by reading this. Notes: Written for this challenge. ( Nicotine. )
a passing outside of Costumes that would be almost spiritual if Viggo didn't look as if he'd gotten into a fight with a hurricane. And won.
*LOL* Oh, I like that line.
Frost-sucked rather than bitten. That's how cold really is. Draws a finger into its mouth and pulls, leeches warmth out with its tongue rather than its teeth.
Very nice description. Really made me feel the cold. Lovely.
And if he does watch, it's only because... Um, because frostbite has suddenly developed sex appeal.
Fantastic. Improv successful; addiction well carried out. And I never really know what to think of when it comes to Viggo most of the time, but there is this sort of... charm you've saddled onto him. *I* want to reach out and touch his cold fingers and the like, because of how Elijah views it. Rawr. Wonderful, wonderful job.
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*LOL* Oh, I like that line.
Frost-sucked rather than bitten. That's how cold really is. Draws a finger into its mouth and pulls, leeches warmth out with its tongue rather than its teeth.
Very nice description. Really made me feel the cold. Lovely.
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Is it because I bite my nails, and smoke, and... hehe.
Great! I love it. Wonderful description of... practically everything.
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Is it because I bite my nails, and smoke, and... hehe.
...and you probably wouldn't mind touching Viggo, yourself? ;)
Thank you!
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Right. :-) Who wouldn't?
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Fantastic. Improv successful; addiction well carried out. And I never really know what to think of when it comes to Viggo most of the time, but there is this sort of... charm you've saddled onto him. *I* want to reach out and touch his cold fingers and the like, because of how Elijah views it. Rawr. Wonderful, wonderful job.
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Woo-hoo! *does victory dance* Thanks.
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You capture the cold brilliantly, and lines like this:
Prickling little waves of pain, hissing like static, incessant reminders of the cold.
-- crackle and hiss with their own electricity. Very nicely done, indeed. :)
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And thanks so much, love!
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