Pawn

Feb 05, 2009 21:54

Title: Pawn
Fandom: Honeydew Syndrome
Rating: PG
Length: 445
Pairing: Jay/Charles
Summary: Jay doesn't know what he wants.

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jay/charles, honeydew syndrome, drabble

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makemegray February 6 2009, 06:57:53 UTC
.....P-please moar?

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confiteor_3 February 6 2009, 15:02:05 UTC
Aww, I don't plan on it, but thanks for reading. :)

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makemegray February 6 2009, 18:41:25 UTC
<------Will continue to drink warm milkshake and hope~

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allyoucaneater February 6 2009, 07:22:08 UTC
;w; more plz... I think this fits well with Jay's dialogue in the recent page ;w;

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confiteor_3 February 6 2009, 15:01:05 UTC
Thanks, it was that page that inspired this. *g* And I don't plan on continuing this since I like it ending this way, but I'm flattered you would want more. ♥

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spiralfanatic February 6 2009, 07:57:46 UTC
Aaaaaw, missed your chance Jay. Very in character I think, well done. :)

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confiteor_3 February 6 2009, 15:01:22 UTC
Thank you! ♥

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gracespradlin February 6 2009, 21:33:46 UTC
Oh, wow, incredible! It deviates from what we want to happen, but is utterly believable.

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confiteor_3 February 6 2009, 21:59:00 UTC
Thank you! Oh, I know, I'm so scared about their relationship, because I could see it believably going either way. *crosses fingers*

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~ blitzkriegcraze February 9 2009, 20:51:14 UTC
...*combusts!*

OOOOOH. dang. i bet Charles felt like he got a slap in the face, when he thought he knew everything all along. god, you write so perfectly. i felt the tension and the attraction Jay felt. wow. just. your drabbles are less than a thousand words long, but they leave me satisfied as if i read a thousand pages. :) more, more, more~!

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Re: ~ confiteor_3 February 9 2009, 22:35:22 UTC
*blushes* Flattery--darn, you hit me in my soft spot. Thank you so much for reading and commenting (and making me blush smile). I'm definitely planning to play with these two some more, because this has not satisfied my craving, like I'd hoped. *g*

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