Surprising Visit

[confiteor_3]

Title: Surprising Visit
Rating: NC-17
Genre: Romance/Smut
Pairing: Angelina/Alicia/Katie
Length: 2911
Summary: Alicia receives information about Katie's progress in Saint Mungo's and drags Angelina along to visit.
Note: This was written as a gift for i_love_amy during hp_springsmut. A huge thank you to my betas hpffthequibbler, lire_casander, and midnitemaraud_r.

Comments

[el_em_en_oh_pee]

HEY, YOU.

[confiteor_3]

Hello. *hides* I'm alive, believe it or not. How are you?

[el_em_en_oh_pee]

HI. I'm fabulous, being alive is good, HOW ARE YOU?, it's been forever, school treatin' you okay? Or are you done with for the year?

[confiteor_3]

Pfft! Don't talk to me about school. *pouts* I have until July 8th, I believe. I'm very glad you're fabulous. *hugs*

[elleian]

Mmm, very nice! *fans self*

Your characterisations were great and bossy!Angelina was amusing. I loved how you added in all these little details such as:

Once she had drawn on the walls because they were so near the shade of parchment. The little girl who had been chewing on the crayons beside her had got in trouble instead.

Thanks for sharing! ♥

[confiteor_3]

Thank you for the lovely comment! ♥

I'm glad you like those little details. That one you mentioned is probably my favourite bit in the fic.

[thanatopsis76]

Goo. I like very much. So much my grammar has gone and left me. Or I left it. Something like that.

Very nice, will there be a second visit?

[confiteor_3]

Aww, thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Of course, though I won't be writing it. These girls gave me such a headache to write, though they were fun. *g*