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confiteor_3

caring

Apr 04, 2006 20:15

Title: Caring ( Read more... )

harry/draco, hump_day, oneshot, harry/draco oneshot

Comments 17

drusillas_rain April 15 2006, 17:17:36 UTC

awwww

confiteor_3 April 15 2006, 18:11:57 UTC

:) Thanks!

physixxx April 15 2006, 17:33:19 UTC

awwwww cracki-fluffi-goodness!

thanks for writing it!

i enjoyed it

confiteor_3 April 15 2006, 18:13:08 UTC

Glad you enjoyed it! I enjoyed writing it. :)

break_myself09 April 15 2006, 21:08:56 UTC

Aw! That was cute.

Just one minor thing I noticed though.

Harry sat stock still as the foot made its way lazily to his crouch and stroked.

This made me laugh and I don't think it's what you meant. ;)

I really enjoyed reading this.

alisanne April 15 2006, 21:55:02 UTC

Awww, so sweet! Alrico. Heh. I enjoyed that a lot. Thanks for sharing!

error? anonymous April 17 2006, 02:23:07 UTC

i think the word you've been looking for is "exaspirated" not "aspirated"... just a nitpicky thing. dunno if that's the right word, so yeah... great job though.