Ice Dare

Aug 18, 2006 16:46

Title: Ice Dare
Rating: NC17
Genre: Smut
Length: 1668, oneshot
Pairing: Harry/Draco
Summary: Draco dares Harry to do something unexpected.
Warning: Rimming
Note: This is the longer story of my 100 word drabble Dare.
Ice Dare )

harry/draco, harry/draco oneshot

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hannahholocaust August 18 2006, 21:19:59 UTC
OHMYGOD I love it!

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confiteor_3 August 20 2006, 11:46:53 UTC
Good! :)

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ilovemybaby August 18 2006, 21:42:39 UTC
God, how I wanted to be in that room!

AMAZING fic!! *adds to mems*

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confiteor_3 August 20 2006, 11:46:34 UTC
I do too. ;)
I'm so happy you like it anough to memories it. *hugs*

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elleian August 18 2006, 21:53:21 UTC
Ooh, very nice! I loved the ending and the way that Draco isn't entirely sure of himself. Great stuff! :)

One small point: 'he wouldn’t have went' should be 'he wouldn’t have gone'.

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confiteor_3 August 20 2006, 11:38:06 UTC
Thanks for the correction! *fixes*
Yes, I made Draco be mroe unsure because I realized I make him made him more sure than Harry in a lot of my fics.

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romanyg August 18 2006, 21:57:40 UTC
Interesting take on the truth or dare motif. It's difficult to keep these two in character for such an exercise, but the voices were spot-on the entire time. Excellent Draco POV. Thank you.

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confiteor_3 August 20 2006, 11:45:53 UTC
I feel so terrible doing the Truth or Dare scenario. It's so unoriginal. But that's what I had in my short drabble so...
You really think the voices were spot on? Yay! Gosh, that makes me feel better.
Thanks!

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romanyg August 20 2006, 18:28:34 UTC
Yes, Draco has enough sang-froid that I could see him doing something completely outrageous without caring much for what other people thought.

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shecrows August 18 2006, 22:08:31 UTC
... ohmygod. wow.

ARE PEOPLE INSANE? THE ROOM EMPTIED? DEAR GOD WHY. lakjsdflkjasdf i would have been sitting there drooling and doing inappropriate things before that kind of display. nggggggggh.

that was lovely.

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confiteor_3 August 20 2006, 11:44:05 UTC
Tell me about it. I figure, the people who wanted to stay got pulled out by people like Hermione.
I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for replying. =)

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