also i can’t believe you told me ”it's only masquerading as a junhwan fic, it's actually junhwe x pain and embarrassment” like THIS COULD POSSIBLY BE A BAD THING TO ME??? like that isn’t my real #1 otp in ikon anyway?? omg your junhwe voice is so put-upon, and funny, and he’s SUCH A DUMB TEENAGER. This situation is nothing short of bizarre, and he knows he’s getting his priorities mixed up, but he’d been this close to making out with Jinhwan. asdfghjkl I CACKLED this is all that matters to him (and to me). your junhwe has absolutely ZERO sense of self-preservation, and it’s the Best Thing Ever. his constant word vomit (A kiss,” Junhwe blurts. I SCREAMED FOR HIM), and inability to have any chill. A dozen selcas later, and Junhwe is not okay. His face- Jinhwan’s face- has gotten progressively redder with each picture, and, fuck. He needs a cold shower. like MY GOD HE IS SO FUCKING EMBARRASSING. it wasn’t even facepalm worthy enough that he was taking bedroom selcas in the first place, he got a hard-on from it. WHY DOES HE DO THIS TO HIMSELF.
Talk about being a sheep in wolf’s clothing. Or quite possibly a wolf in sheep’s clothing. A wolf surrounded by a pack of rabid, wolf-eating sheep. i’m dying, he is so over the top dramatic. and also so fucking obnoxious, proposing “They exist for a reason, sure, I get that. But there are just so many of them.” like he is making a completely thoughtful suggestion or something. can i just say the bits where you contrasted him with jinhwan were my favourite? like when jinhwan was giving him instructions on how to passibly be him, and then junhwe just replies with “Uh,” Junhwe tries. “Don’t be too friendly. And don’t talk to my sister.” and the bit with chanwoo walking in on them the first time and jinhwan kicking him for being such an insolent brat. actually, i mean this was inevitable considering this entire thing was from junhwe’s pov, but i love your jinhwan. he’s so sweet and kind, but also knows how to be authoritative and strict when he needs to be. urghh, no wonder junhwe is so taken by him!! WHO WOULDN’T BE.
you honestly took FULL ADVANTAGE of the body swap trope to make things as uncomfortable as possible for junhwe, i’m so grateful. i really loved that entire scene in the classroom where junhwe couldn’t bring himself to kiss his own body. because IT WOULD BE SO STRANGE. i really like that you kept emphasising how uncomfortable it was for him to be in jinhwan’s body, just physically because he’s attracted to him (keeping his eyes closed in the shower, lmao, what a gentleman). and you ALSO USED IT TO EMPHASISE THE SIZE DIFFERENCE!! my favourite thing!! He rises to his feet, and- well, fuck. That’s as far as he rises. i cried, jinhwan is so tiny. junhwe is so obsessed with jinhwan being tiny T____T Jinhwan has him backed up against the wall, their difference in height allowing Jinhwan to lean comfortably over him. urghhhhhhh even though it’s bodies swapped THIS IMAGERY >___<
lmaooooooo the school having a spell over it to punish people who break the rules. rei you’re such a square (jk, ily, this is so magical shojo anima sobs. KISS KISS FALL IN LOVE). urghhh, you ended it sooooo sweetly T___T lmaoooo i love that junhwe is never free from embarrassment though, dumb boy. but like “I want to kiss you,” Junhwe blurts. contrasting it back to the beginning of the fuck. URGH THEY’RE SO CUTE. SO GROSS. cries i hope they make out all the time now ;~~~; i also love that in between everything you managed to give junhwe a moral lessons??? lmao like even if it was that the council wasn’t even that bad, it was such a nice way to tie everything back to the beginning. sobs his character growth :’)
okay i’m just going to quote some of my other favourite lines that i couldn’t mention now: "I knew you were good at math," Jinhwan murmurs, and then gets on tiptoe to kiss him.” jfc I SWEAR YOU HAVE THE BEST DIALOGUE. all the banter and exchanges in your fic were so funny, and so natural and clean as well. your one-liners are SO GOOD, omg like i could pretty much quote all of them tbh. but i loved this one so much, it’s both abrupt (from junhwe’s POV), but also such a great way to release the tension, and omg jinhwan always knowing.
Junhwe had hoped for a sort of a council hit list with the biggest rule-breakers in school, Nam Taehyun at the very forefront. 1) council hit list, junhwe is soooo OTT he’s amazing 2) SCREAMS LITERALLY ALL THE WINNER CAMEOS IN THIS FIC!!! i’m so spoilt!!!
Donghyuk breaks out into a vindictive smile. “Oh, I forgot. You think Kim Jinhwan is perfect.” and Donghyuk closes both his eyes and strikes a dramatic pose, the back of his right hand over his forehead. “Jinhwan, take me!” LMAO I LOVE DONGHYUK TEASING HIM ABOUT HIS CRUSH. omgggg i can see junhwe’s red face SO PERFECTLY.
Junhwe opens his mouth before he even knows what he’s going to say. “It was my fault,” he blurts, “I kissed Jinhwan.” /SWOON/ okay he wasn’t fooling anyone, but JUNHWE COMING TO JINHWAN’S DEFENCE T___T he cares about him so much, i hate it!!! it’s awful!!
OTL this comment is so long. BUT THANK YOU SO SO SO MUCH REI!!! i really wasn’t expecting it all, i was SO SURPRISED T___T and it was literally everything i have ever wanted and more??? omg honestly you have no idea how happy i am!! i always feel vaguely guilty about venting to you about how miserable/anxious i’m feeling at any time, but at least you get a good idea of how much this managed to cheer me up T____T it honestly made my week, i’m so touched ♥♥♥ i really wasn’t looking forward to my bday, but honestly maybe it won’t be so bad u___u sobs Amazing Beta Reet, what a lie. YOU’RE THE AMAZING ONE, i don’t deserve you at all!!! but please keep a little place for me in your heart anyway ;;; sdfghkjjlk, i LOVE this fic, and i love you even more!!! also yes i definitely listened to this the entire way through reading this fic. ~AITAI IMA YASASHII KIMI NI SAKURA KISSU TOKIMEITARA RANMAN KOI SHI YO~
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No but really, tysm for this comment it's!!! So sweet and funny and way too generous, how do I even respond! My cheeks hurt after reading it because I had a ridiculous huge smile on my face the whole time. I'm probably going to end up repeating this at some point but I'M SO GLAD YOU LIKED IT. This is the most important thing, this is all that matters! AND OK LISTEN HERE I never said anything about "topp dogg drabbles", I said I wrote something and if you had the time you could take a look!! I know you were disappointed you missed out on some topp dogg but don't put words in my mouth u__u (truth be told I was so worried my plan wouldn't work, when it did I was like \o/\o/). Anyway, your incredibly long comment means a lot to me, I will cherish it! Thank you for bothering to leave such a detailed one omg.
Sobs a bingo board for my junhwan would be full of things like "junhwe is smitten and does something dumb", "junhwe breathes and manages to embarrass himself", "bobby does skinship with june, june dies a little on the inside", "bobby does skinship with jinhwan, june dies a lot on the inside". And screams, I feel like I should probably vary my writing a little bit but the_heart_wants_what_it_wants.mp3. I'm a one trick pony ;___; literally wrote junhwe pining after jinhwan in three different settings. his internal monologue of “disdain glare ~*~JINHWAN SENPAI~*~ grumpy frown snark” THIS IS IT, THIS IS WHAT I LIVE FOR. And hey, his constant word vomit, and inability to have any chill were you describing yourself here???
(I'm just kidding, please don't ever change <3)
Ngl, 97line is a lot of fun to write, they have (the potential to have) such an interesting dynamic? Pretty sure at some point I was like, hey donghwe clash but not in a bad way, they should really just end up together!! But lmao of course it never happened. i love how as much as june glares at double b, his and donghyuk’s friendship is so strange and invasive in it’s own way wow this is a really great point, it never occurred to me! u__u And ahhh I'm relieved you think I pulled off the dialogue, because halfway through I was like, what am I doing is this even how people talk??? But okay annoying smarty-pants, at the very least, is something I think I can do. Because. I have a friend. Or something.
it wasn’t even facepalm worthy enough that he was taking bedroom selcas in the first place, he got a hard-on from it. Screams why do people think this!!! Okay, no, it’s not nearly that bad, but he needs to stop. He was just being dramatic u__u honestly that scene! I couldn't keep a straight face writing/editing it, I want to know why he's so dumb too!! And yes, absolutely, if there were a sequel to this it would just be full of them making out everywhere but in school. Please visualise this for the full experience.
/THROWS FLOWER PETALS AT YOU/ ILY REET. If this has brought any cheer at all to your life it means I've succeeded, so I'm very happy you enjoyed it! Knowing it made your day makes everything worth it -- not that it would ever NOT be worth it, since you're deserving of all the wonderful fic you could possibly want. Except maybe the fauxcest infidelity dub-con one, idk who'd be willing to write that for you u__u Please don't ever feel bad about "venting" to me about whatever, it's really not burdensome like you seem to think it is!! And ilsym you're the greatest, have a great birthday! <3
Talk about being a sheep in wolf’s clothing. Or quite possibly a wolf in sheep’s clothing. A wolf surrounded by a pack of rabid, wolf-eating sheep. i’m dying, he is so over the top dramatic. and also so fucking obnoxious, proposing “They exist for a reason, sure, I get that. But there are just so many of them.” like he is making a completely thoughtful suggestion or something. can i just say the bits where you contrasted him with jinhwan were my favourite? like when jinhwan was giving him instructions on how to passibly be him, and then junhwe just replies with “Uh,” Junhwe tries. “Don’t be too friendly. And don’t talk to my sister.” and the bit with chanwoo walking in on them the first time and jinhwan kicking him for being such an insolent brat. actually, i mean this was inevitable considering this entire thing was from junhwe’s pov, but i love your jinhwan. he’s so sweet and kind, but also knows how to be authoritative and strict when he needs to be. urghh, no wonder junhwe is so taken by him!! WHO WOULDN’T BE.
you honestly took FULL ADVANTAGE of the body swap trope to make things as uncomfortable as possible for junhwe, i’m so grateful. i really loved that entire scene in the classroom where junhwe couldn’t bring himself to kiss his own body. because IT WOULD BE SO STRANGE. i really like that you kept emphasising how uncomfortable it was for him to be in jinhwan’s body, just physically because he’s attracted to him (keeping his eyes closed in the shower, lmao, what a gentleman). and you ALSO USED IT TO EMPHASISE THE SIZE DIFFERENCE!! my favourite thing!! He rises to his feet, and- well, fuck. That’s as far as he rises. i cried, jinhwan is so tiny. junhwe is so obsessed with jinhwan being tiny T____T Jinhwan has him backed up against the wall, their difference in height allowing Jinhwan to lean comfortably over him. urghhhhhhh even though it’s bodies swapped THIS IMAGERY >___<
lmaooooooo the school having a spell over it to punish people who break the rules. rei you’re such a square (jk, ily, this is so magical shojo anima sobs. KISS KISS FALL IN LOVE). urghhh, you ended it sooooo sweetly T___T lmaoooo i love that junhwe is never free from embarrassment though, dumb boy. but like “I want to kiss you,” Junhwe blurts. contrasting it back to the beginning of the fuck. URGH THEY’RE SO CUTE. SO GROSS. cries i hope they make out all the time now ;~~~; i also love that in between everything you managed to give junhwe a moral lessons??? lmao like even if it was that the council wasn’t even that bad, it was such a nice way to tie everything back to the beginning. sobs his character growth :’)
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Junhwe had hoped for a sort of a council hit list with the biggest rule-breakers in school, Nam Taehyun at the very forefront. 1) council hit list, junhwe is soooo OTT he’s amazing 2) SCREAMS LITERALLY ALL THE WINNER CAMEOS IN THIS FIC!!! i’m so spoilt!!!
Donghyuk breaks out into a vindictive smile. “Oh, I forgot. You think Kim Jinhwan is perfect.” and Donghyuk closes both his eyes and strikes a dramatic pose, the back of his right hand over his forehead. “Jinhwan, take me!” LMAO I LOVE DONGHYUK TEASING HIM ABOUT HIS CRUSH. omgggg i can see junhwe’s red face SO PERFECTLY.
Junhwe opens his mouth before he even knows what he’s going to say. “It was my fault,” he blurts, “I kissed Jinhwan.” /SWOON/ okay he wasn’t fooling anyone, but JUNHWE COMING TO JINHWAN’S DEFENCE T___T he cares about him so much, i hate it!!! it’s awful!!
OTL this comment is so long. BUT THANK YOU SO SO SO MUCH REI!!! i really wasn’t expecting it all, i was SO SURPRISED T___T and it was literally everything i have ever wanted and more??? omg honestly you have no idea how happy i am!! i always feel vaguely guilty about venting to you about how miserable/anxious i’m feeling at any time, but at least you get a good idea of how much this managed to cheer me up T____T it honestly made my week, i’m so touched ♥♥♥ i really wasn’t looking forward to my bday, but honestly maybe it won’t be so bad u___u sobs Amazing Beta Reet, what a lie. YOU’RE THE AMAZING ONE, i don’t deserve you at all!!! but please keep a little place for me in your heart anyway ;;; sdfghkjjlk, i LOVE this fic, and i love you even more!!! also yes i definitely listened to this the entire way through reading this fic. ~AITAI IMA YASASHII KIMI NI SAKURA KISSU TOKIMEITARA RANMAN KOI SHI YO~
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No but really, tysm for this comment it's!!! So sweet and funny and way too generous, how do I even respond! My cheeks hurt after reading it because I had a ridiculous huge smile on my face the whole time. I'm probably going to end up repeating this at some point but I'M SO GLAD YOU LIKED IT. This is the most important thing, this is all that matters! AND OK LISTEN HERE I never said anything about "topp dogg drabbles", I said I wrote something and if you had the time you could take a look!! I know you were disappointed you missed out on some topp dogg but don't put words in my mouth u__u (truth be told I was so worried my plan wouldn't work, when it did I was like \o/\o/). Anyway, your incredibly long comment means a lot to me, I will cherish it! Thank you for bothering to leave such a detailed one omg.
Sobs a bingo board for my junhwan would be full of things like "junhwe is smitten and does something dumb", "junhwe breathes and manages to embarrass himself", "bobby does skinship with june, june dies a little on the inside", "bobby does skinship with jinhwan, june dies a lot on the inside". And screams, I feel like I should probably vary my writing a little bit but the_heart_wants_what_it_wants.mp3. I'm a one trick pony ;___; literally wrote junhwe pining after jinhwan in three different settings. his internal monologue of “disdain glare ~*~JINHWAN SENPAI~*~ grumpy frown snark” THIS IS IT, THIS IS WHAT I LIVE FOR. And hey, his constant word vomit, and inability to have any chill were you describing yourself here???
(I'm just kidding, please don't ever change <3)
Ngl, 97line is a lot of fun to write, they have (the potential to have) such an interesting dynamic? Pretty sure at some point I was like, hey donghwe clash but not in a bad way, they should really just end up together!! But lmao of course it never happened. i love how as much as june glares at double b, his and donghyuk’s friendship is so strange and invasive in it’s own way wow this is a really great point, it never occurred to me! u__u And ahhh I'm relieved you think I pulled off the dialogue, because halfway through I was like, what am I doing is this even how people talk??? But okay annoying smarty-pants, at the very least, is something I think I can do. Because. I have a friend. Or something.
it wasn’t even facepalm worthy enough that he was taking bedroom selcas in the first place, he got a hard-on from it. Screams why do people think this!!! Okay, no, it’s not nearly that bad, but he needs to stop. He was just being dramatic u__u honestly that scene! I couldn't keep a straight face writing/editing it, I want to know why he's so dumb too!! And yes, absolutely, if there were a sequel to this it would just be full of them making out everywhere but in school. Please visualise this for the full experience.
/THROWS FLOWER PETALS AT YOU/ ILY REET. If this has brought any cheer at all to your life it means I've succeeded, so I'm very happy you enjoyed it! Knowing it made your day makes everything worth it -- not that it would ever NOT be worth it, since you're deserving of all the wonderful fic you could possibly want. Except maybe the fauxcest infidelity dub-con one, idk who'd be willing to write that for you u__u Please don't ever feel bad about "venting" to me about whatever, it's really not burdensome like you seem to think it is!! And ilsym you're the greatest, have a great birthday! <3
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