Tales of Vesperia - Overprotective

[meimi]

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[darkpsycho1000]

Aw. So sweet. I love their little friendly friend relationship. And of course--you're just amazing. It doesn't matter WHAT story or when or where, you just have this amazing talent to put so much life into the characters that you write for. Everything sounds so natural, I don't know, I wish I could do it despite my inability to explain.

and lol at Flynn XDD and of course Yuri, i love his little snide remarks about the other in the writing.

[meimi]

Aw, you make me blush. :o I do my best to write coherently! =_=;; Sometimes I fail, sometimes I succeed. Thankfully, I succeeded this time~

[ruaki]

Hahahaha, is there such a thing as snarky fluff? Cause this is totally it.

It's such an ingrained habit. Whenever I see you doing something stupid, I just have this automatic urge to save you from yourself.

BWA HAHAHAHAHA

"Well, yes." Flynn sounded confused. Of course he would. "What else was I supposed to do?"

I think the fact that he sounded confused by the question just pretty much sums up everything Flynn right there.

"You've got the mother hen act down pat and the hair definitely works in favor of that explanation too."

!!!!!!!

OH MY GOD YOU'RE RIGHT
YOU'RE TOTALLY RIGHT
I NEVER NOTICED THIS

But yes! ♥♥♥ I like your Yuri voice--he certainly doesn't hold back, and Yuri and Flynn interact very naturally in this--the dialogue isn't forced and the chemistry is rich in protein and fangirl fiber. =( you're still a tease though

Great job! Thanks for sharing it. ;_; It was lovely and I hope you had fun writing it. ♥

[meimi]

XD I think this is about as fluffy as they can manage... before they start bitching at each other anyway. They probably still bitch at each other during sex...

:| Oh come on, his hair has got so many little spikeys... they look like feathers. :| Chicken feathers!

When am I not a tease?

♥

[ruaki]

[meimi]

=( No Yuri chick for him to harass love harass? Poor hen!Flynn has an empty nest! :o

[aori_tsuki]

You know, this fic can only made me say 'awwww' the whole time. (And we all know that Flynn would be the motherhen, if playable.) Of course, Yuri trying to be a bastard and Flynn just going along with the ride made me grin too.

But yes, the characters were captured perfectly and I really, really love this. ♥ Not to mention that my brain kept slashing them. Whoo.

[meimi]

I'm glad you liked it! :D I'm sure Flynn likes going on Yuri's little rides. >:D

♥ Oh that's okay, they immediately started snogging the instant I finished it. =_=;;;

[aori_tsuki]

There's no denying that Flynn does this on purpose too. >: Flynn, just admit it that you want to jump Yuri already.

L-lol, I keep getting this image that Sodia will burst in the room with the notion that a fugitive is there, and she'll see them making out and then she'll really go hysterical.

[meimi]

re: Sodia... Close enough? :o

[meimi]

^_~

I think the real question is, when isn't he begging for a spanking from mommy!Flynn? Oh ho ho~

[moonwolf13]

Awwwwwwwwwwww~~~~~~~~ The sugary sweetness!!! I must've had diabetes by now. It's a shame that you haven't been posting more TOV fics. I've enjoyed your porn-filled ones too. Please do write more Flynn/Yuri!!!