xxxHOLiC; Doumeki; favor me with silence, chapter one

[con_noncuranza]

Fandom: xxxHOLiC
title: favor me with silence
rating: Yeah. R. Warnings under that R rating--though warnings will be posted at the beginning of each chapter: Language, violence, rape/sexual abuse, normal abuse, graphic images, even a little guro, but it too is nonconsensual and purely for plot purposes. So, gross stuff and general suckiness.

Comments

[ellrohan]

I'm curious abut this story! It's very very different to any other xxxholic fanfics I've read ♥

Poor teeny Shizuka ;____; It's a nice twist for him to be the odd one :D

[nebulia]

Thanks!

[eoedad]

... You made me cry. This is not a very nice thanks for the fic! You write the characters so realistically, and I can just imagine a little boy being confused by the ability of the guards to dehumanize the prisoners (the children!), and... the food made me laugh, a bit, but it was still so very sad. I had dance rehearsal today, so I'm actually wearing makeup for once, and the mascara is streaking all over my face.

I guess it's a compliment, in a roundabout way, because I don't cry very often at all, but it's so beautiful and poignant and... *whimper* Can you maybe write a little bit of fluffiness? Not in this au, obviously, but just for fun?

Gaaaaaaaah. *goes to raid your memories for fluff*

[nebulia]

Thank you...?

No, really, though, thanks. (also, I love your icon. I'm not a dancer, but Martha Graham=WIN.)

Fluff--i'm working on it Actually, this fic is not entirely angst-fest...but you'll have to wait a while for it to be anything but. XDDD

I'll try some fluff though. I'm working on a prompt for the kink meme...?

[eoedad]

You're welcome-- really, you earned it. (I love Graham's choreography-- it's so beautiful. Much better than Cunningham. I'm curious: can you read what the text says?)

Grr. Hurry up, then. *glares menacingly* XD

Well, that should be... interesting, anyway. Have fun! *has never written anything that could even possibly be called 'kink'*

[nebulia]

Thank you!

[randomkyuu]

aggsoidjterijnfjgdijsfmk/ Ilu. Seriously. Complete and utter UBERLOVE.

Your writing is wonderful; the emotions are poignant, poor little Shizuka is very believable and in-character, and the little details you add just take it all up a notch or two.

I'm totally in love with this fic now, and I can't wait for future chapters. So please, provide us with more? Soon?

[nebulia]

Thank you!

More is forthcoming. Never fear! XDDDD

[travellyr]

laskjfaijw You had me into a frothing RANT at my poor kitchen while I did dishes and started dinner, LAKJSLIJSFDNFJD CHILDREN WTF.
...this is good, it means your writing was "real" to me. ^^;;;;

I'm fascinated to see where you continue to take this, and to see what else inspires vehement ranting at hapless dishwashers.

[con_noncuranza]

Thank you! (you made me lol, btw--I like to rant at the fridge, myself XDDD)