Comments | con_noncuranza: xxxHOLiC; barcode, part viii; doumeki, watanuki; r

con_noncuranza

xxxHOLiC; barcode, part viii; doumeki, watanuki; r

Jan 08, 2009 16:19

fandom: xxxHOLiC
story: barcode
summary: like anyone else who does not have a soul, you cannot stand anyone who has too much of one [doumeki, watanuki, violence, creepiness, weirdness]
notes/warnings: lots of bleeding Doumeki. Watanuki in withdrawal. Um...yeah.

part one
part two
part three
part four
part five
part six
part seven

( all he can think about are those first few missions when they were…young, when they were younger, and afterwards, panting and bloody and half-dead and high they’d come together and sleep in one bed and tangle around each other, one thing. Not two. )

fandom: xxxholic, rating: r, char: watanuki, wip, char: doumeki, char: kyle, story: barcode

Comments 8

eoedad January 8 2009, 23:02:19 UTC

My eyes are actually watering. Why do you do this to everyone? This is... gorgeous, of course, but also one of the most painful things I have ever read. And I'm wondering about -- that had better not be Subaru! -- the person in the corner, and I'm supposed to be leaving for dance class right now, and dammit you are very distracting. More? Because I am apparently a masochist?

nebulia January 8 2009, 23:12:27 UTC

Thank you. *blush* I'm sorry, 104! I didn't mean to hurt you! D:

...no, wait. I kinda did. >.>

No, the person is not Subaru, but I'm a little glad you're still in the dark, as I've not wanted to give too much away. As a clue, though: Its having one working eye is not important to who It is at all.

I'm sorry I'm distracting! I dunno when I'll get more out, but I will work hard on it. :) I think the big reveal for who It is will be in the next part, so you'll figure it out soon enough. :)

And there will be some Subaru/Seishirou information in the next few parts as well, but I dunno when that will be exactly. I mean, I can't just leave them with the info that's out there right now, you know.

Hee, you're not a masochist. I am brainwashing you for my army of souls. XD

eoedad January 9 2009, 02:00:07 UTC

*glare* Jerk. You definitely did. ... You know, if you're that intent on ripping our collective heart out of our chest, you could at least have the courtesy to do it less... addictively.

Thank god. :) I'm writing the next part of TDDUP; the lastthing I need is more depressing Subaru. The one I'm creating is more than enough, thanks. ;)

AHAH YEEEESSSSSSSS SEI/SUB. ^^ Such a generous wife I have. XDDDDDD

Ah. Okay, then. But you realize that any brainwashing attempt involving me has to include dance. Once you have that, it's pretty much a given. I'm rather easy in that regard. :)

smokexscribbles January 9 2009, 03:36:03 UTC

Ngh.

<3.

D-doumeki. Watanuki. It. All of them.

Ngk. It's so perfectly... tense, scary, like everything is about to go wrong. And the more I read the more I love this AU.

nebulia January 30 2009, 16:36:49 UTC

Late reply is late...

and heh. Uh, yeah.

Thank you! You always make me blush. :D

alexiel_neesan January 30 2009, 15:08:21 UTC

It's not exactly gorgous, for this story reeks and feels like filth, hurt, and despair but... wow. I mean, the narrative is broken and somewhat confusing, but you're in the characters' heads so it makes sense. The universe feels bleak and empty and grey with just tiny indications. The reader is just parachuted into the situation and got to hang on for the rest of the ride.
And I think it's a great job. Keep up the good work!

nebulia January 30 2009, 16:35:26 UTC

Oh, thanks you! This is exactly, exactly what I'm going for. :D I'm glad you like it.

pspgm February 4 2009, 04:14:16 UTC

Addicted. I am addicted bad to this story. Best dark!fic I've read for this fandom, ever.