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Apr 15, 2007 00:12

Writing is still going very, very slowly. It's like dragging nails down a chalk board and damn if I didn't break those fucking nails. You can't keep me from writing, brain!I may upload a Suigetsu/Sasuke fic later today...if I can stop hating it. Also, may be some Karin/Sasuke/Suigetsu threesome in order. :D ♥ Team Sasuke ( Read more... )

without looking back, naruto, fic

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bakkhos April 14 2007, 15:39:21 UTC
Team Sasuke fic from you:

ALsjKDhaKJFHN EJLREWL;IQNR;K/LWEHTJQ;WL/'RETNJHJ;WKT4H YESSSSSSSSSS PLZ!

Breathe .... breathe ....

:D :D :D

Sorry, I just had to say that before I read this.

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compagnie April 14 2007, 15:43:29 UTC
AHAHAHAHA. I LOVE YOU. MY WRITING IS KILLING ME (in a bad, painful way). AND PLZ REFRESH, I HAD A VERY STUPID TYPO(S) AT THE END. DDD:

PLZ MAKE HAPPY POST OF THREESOME LOVE TO INSPIRE ME. CAUSE I'M SURE IT WILL.

bad things for you:

Suigetsu’s words echoed in the stillness of the forest around them, broken by the occasional cawing bird and insect. Sasuke let the silence settle before speaking. “Shut up, your opinion of her doesn’t matter. She has something I need.”

“Che, yeah, if you like tits. Girl’s useless at fighting.” Suigetsu sprawled out, the tips of his sandaled toes digging into the dirt around the fire.

(can you tell if i have his voice yet? am dying dying dying even tho you probably can't read anything from that.)

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bakkhos April 14 2007, 15:51:08 UTC
♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

I was just re-reading your past chapters to refresh myself on this story. BUT NOW YOU MUST TELL ME WHAT THE TYPO WAS. Was it as cool as copulation instead of compilation?

IF YOU WANT ME TO WRITE HAPPY THREESOME LOVE, FIND A TEAM SASUKE SEX PIC AND POST IT TO MY LATEST MEME. (That SO wasn't just begging for a Team Sasuke threesome pic.)

I would say get rid of Sasuke saying "Shut up" because it sounds more like him without it. Just like a straight, matter-of-fact "Your opinion doesn't matter." LOL.

;_; What Suigetsu said makes me cry. But it sounds like him, at least. :D

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compagnie April 14 2007, 16:03:12 UTC
AHAHAHAHAHA SHUT UP. totally wasn't my fault. for reals. and no, not as cool. unfortunately. i have some of the worst typos ever man, since I don't normally have a beta-reader and just do a quick over by myself. I should probably get me one of those. *lazy*

OH GOD I WOULD LOVE TO SEE A SEXY TEAM SASUKE PIC. surely some of the jap-fans are drawing it out? must. look. hot.

If YOU find such a picture, you must share with me.

fjlkajklf. but doesn't sasuke say shut up a lot now in the manga? or is that just my translation version? for some reason, that stuck out to me so I added the shut up in his speaking. TELL ME THE TRUTH, NOW.

Well, Suigetsu is probably biased, since he seems to hate her. But Naruto manga proves that hate is just another form of love. I mean, gosh, look at Naruto and Sasuke and Sasuke and Itachi. And god, I almost feel dirty for putting Itachi in this fic as a six year old who shall have such a crush on Sasuke. Okay, haha, no I don't but like awesome, yah ( ... )

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bakkhos April 14 2007, 16:42:48 UTC
*nods* Mmmm, hmmm, not your fault. I totally believe you there. I need beta readers, too, if only to point out the number of times I repeat certain words in succession. I've accepted the fact that that is the way my brain seems to work, but that doesn't mean it can't be changed ( ... )

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compagnie April 14 2007, 17:08:34 UTC
I will reply properly tmrw when I am not asleep. DAMN YOU, JAPAN. *shakes fist*

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compagnie April 15 2007, 03:40:48 UTC
I AM LOOKING FOR THREESOME LOVE. I am so sad that I will miss the next comic con for being in America (boo!) because I bet you there will be doujinshi of Team Sasuke and guuuuuh. I want to hit that.

Mine does say shut up! I'll send you the version via email. :) I could check it myself but I'ma lazy...

Yes, I dooo mean the Tea and Dango one (is that what the series is officially called?). Awesome awesome. I almost don't want Itachi to kill the clan in it just so poor ittle Sasuke can grow up abused (oh god is that horrible or what but I love his absolute adoration of Itachi and the anger he has too and Itachi trying to make him hate him is just...love). :DDD *horrid*

I totally can't do it maybe one day when I am drunk cause I'd be all IT SUCKS YOU HATE IT and then scrap it before you could confirm your hate. XD;;;

YES. LET US WRITE IT TOGETHER. IT WILL BE AWESOME. If we can ever get online at the same time ;__; ororor...wanna try via email?

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bakkhos April 15 2007, 17:29:23 UTC
When/where is this American Comic Con of which you speak? *jumps up and down* I wanna go!

Where my shut up translation at? Does he really say "urusai" then? You know, I've been wanting to double check on translations because there are two different interpretations about Karin's ability that I want to find the truth about. Gimmie!

Haha, "officially called." More like, randomly deemed. XD XD

I almost don't want Itachi to kill the clan in it just so poor ittle Sasuke can grow up abused

LOL. It may sound horrible, but I laughed. :D I should continue on with that series, no?

I HIGHLY RECOMMEND GETTING DRUNK THEN because I want to read it.

My lj friend just mentioned the awesomeness that is Google Docs for collaborating on fanfic. We should try that. ♥

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