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Jan 30, 2016 00:02

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sapphire2309 January 30 2016, 07:58:42 UTC

any, any, i find pieces of myself everywhere, and i cut myself handling them

Fill 1/2: SGA/Dollhouse, mostly John Sheppard nagi_schwarz February 1 2016, 05:59:01 UTC

"What is this about, Colonel?" Woolsey asked. He, Keller, Rodney, Ronon, Teyla, Lorne, Ceccoli, and Zelenka were all gathered in John's room ( ... )

Fill 2/2: SGA/Dollhouse, mostly John Sheppard nagi_schwarz February 1 2016, 06:00:09 UTC

Ronon wrangled him onto a cot. Keller checked his forehead, checked his breathing. John caught her gaze and held it ( ... )

Re: Fill 2/2: SGA/Dollhouse, mostly John Sheppard brumeier February 1 2016, 14:46:27 UTC

Oh, John! ::hugs him:: That was so hard for him, coming clean with everyone. But he did it, and it's got to be a relief to finally have that out. Not having to hide himself anymore, not from the people who matter.

And such a perfect ending line for this fic, with John revealing his true name.

Love it, love it, love it!

Re: Fill 2/2: SGA/Dollhouse, mostly John Sheppard nagi_schwarz February 1 2016, 14:49:49 UTC

Thanks you so much! I wrote and rewrote the ending of this, and it just kept dragging on too long, and then I just cut it off, and I reread a bunch of old posts in the 'verse, and i am so, so glad this worked.

I am working on one final part from last week's run of prompts but it is giving me a hell of a lot of trouble, and I also need to get to court. I will probably sneak it in under the wire on the Sunday post when it is done though.

Re: Fill 2/2: SGA/Dollhouse, mostly John Sheppard brumeier February 1 2016, 14:52:25 UTC

How have you even had time for work, with all the writing you've been doing? LOL! You've been ruling these prompts!

You ended it in just the right spot. I didn't feel that it was at all draggy. I know for myself, when I try to end a fic I end up with a LOTR ending - like four or five endings before I get to the real one. It's a problem. ::grins::

Re: Fill 2/2: SGA/Dollhouse, mostly John Sheppard nagi_schwarz February 1 2016, 14:57:20 UTC

Last week I admittedly didn't get a lot of sleep...

Re: Fill 2/2: SGA/Dollhouse, mostly John Sheppard brumeier February 1 2016, 15:06:25 UTC

I'm not a bit surprised.

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