Thursday: Families

Jun 25, 2009 00:00

Well hey y'all! I’m bwhouwant2b it's my final day as guest host here at comment_fic and I have to say that it has been great, I've really enjoyed seeing all the prompts that y'all let and all the things that got written.

Today’s theme is going to be FamiliesEverybody has a family either the family they've chosen or the family they were born with. So I want us to look ( Read more... )

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badfalcon June 25 2009, 18:04:23 UTC
"Yes, mama." Christian sighed and dragged a hand through his hair before answering. "It was Riley..."

"Riley is a boy," she reminded him.

"That's debatable." Christian laughed genuinely and shook his head, his lips quirked up in a smile. "His girlfriend," he explained. "She offered to surrogate - she knew how much me and Steve wanted a family and..." he trailed off, one shoulder shrugging as he dropped his gaze to the coffee mug his hands curled around. "And that's really it."

"I see..." Christian's mama trailed off thoughtfully, before reaching out and cuffing him hard round the back of the head. She ignored his outcry and took her own sip of coffee, watching him intently. "You maybe wanna try that again, Christian. And this time, tell me the truth."

Another sigh escaped Christian and he pinched the bridge of his nose. "Mama..." He looked up at the sound of the door opening; his face lighting up as Steve walked in, carrying Sarah in his arms. He took their daughter from him, cradling her against his chest.

"She looks like you," she said, meeting Christian's eyes. She looked at Steve and smiled softly. "Both of you," she continued, emphasising the word 'both' and watching as the tops of Steve's cheeks flushed pink.

An almost shy smile lit up Steve's face and, his eyes still on Christian's mama, he stepped up behind Christian and wrapped his arms around him. He rested his chin on Christian's shoulder, one hand resting against Sarah's head.

"She's beautiful," she encouraged, heart soaring at the grin that lit up on Christian's face.

Christian lifted his eyes, met his mama's gaze. "Thank you," he whispered, leaning back against Steve's chest. "She's ours," he said, confirming what she already knew. "Sarah... she's me and Steve's lil girl."

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havenward June 25 2009, 18:05:40 UTC
:melts and happy sighs:

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cyphersushi June 25 2009, 18:15:02 UTC
Awww!

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honeyjojames June 25 2009, 19:43:34 UTC
Awwwwwwwwwww! *happysigh*

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csichick_2 June 25 2009, 20:28:46 UTC
Awwwww!

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bwhouwant2b June 26 2009, 16:57:39 UTC
♥♥ I love Sarah and Mama Kane!
*happysigh*

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