Wednesday: All Dialogue/No Dialogue

Jun 10, 2009 07:05

Today's theme is All Dialogue/No DialogueThat's right. Today, writers have to decide whether to write their chosen prompt completely in dialogue, or without any dialogue at all. Or you could always do one of each. :D ( Read more... )

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nbaeker June 10 2009, 06:39:58 UTC
He's called from the field and she isn't quite sure why, as they've already practically solved the case. Her job is surely over, but then he asks that she join him.

Though a small part of her tells her not to, she does.

He greets her warmly, as if nothing is amiss, and she takes that to be a good sign. But when he takes her away from the others, his face reveals that he's a lot more broken than he cares to admit.

She pulls him close and they stay like that for a moment. She is content until he captures her face in his hands and kisses her passionately.

It's everything she dreamed it would be and more, and she pulls him closer. He's murmuring something but gets distracted by kissing down her neck and she doesn't really care what he's saying anyways.

Their hands are all over each other as they make it to his car. He pushes her up against the door, sliding his hands up her thighs and she's grateful that she always wears skirts.

His fingers hook under the band of her panties before he thinks better of it and simply moves them aside.

She writhes against his fingers and he circles her clit to bring her close to climax. When she starts to beg, he frees his erection and slides into her.

They both cry out; it's like coming home and coming apart all at once.

All too soon it's over. He has lost his haunted look and is mostly back to being her Morgan. Happy, fun, and most importantly, ready to go home and try round two.

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emmademarais June 10 2009, 06:45:37 UTC
Wow, that was hot and unexpected!

I posted a gen pairing *and* a prompt I was certain would elicit dialogue only fic and I got het porn with no dialogue! LOL

No worries, I love good porn and I write Morgan/Garcia myself - I just figured I'd pick a prompt that would be more likely to get written.

But give that this one's not even an hour old, not a concern evidently! /big grin/

Thanks for writing this! I hope you'll go ahead and post it to the Morgan/Garcia comm. They could always use some good M/G fic there.

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nbaeker June 10 2009, 07:14:37 UTC
... I didn't even know there was a Morgan/Garcia comm!

lol I just write what strikes my fancy. At midnight, this did it.

I'm glad you liked it. I try to make my comments porn-y here, but it doesn't always work. I'm glad that this time it did.

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emmademarais June 10 2009, 07:26:20 UTC
Yes!

Go check out morgan_garcia!

There's a dearth of good MG fic so I'm sure if you post it will be welcomed with open arms.

It's amusing that some people view all comment fic as comment porn - which is how I got started in it - but for all the porn I write (which is copious) I do really love writing short gen fic so the option for variety here is fabulous!

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maab_connor June 10 2009, 14:25:44 UTC
guh and aww... basically perfect for morgan/garcia \o/

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