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MONDAY: Outsider Point of View

Jun 08, 2009 09:38

Hi! I'm darkhavens and I'll be your Guest Host this week.

First theme of the week is Third Person Limited Point of View* Outsider Point of View. That means that writers will be writing from the POV of someone who is not one of the primary characters/pairing ( Read more... )

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darkhavens June 8 2009, 08:41:50 UTC

DCU (Justice League), Batman/Flash, discovery (POV author's choice of JL characters)

darkhavens April 14 2010, 01:06:09 UTC

Superman hated that Flash and Batman were together. It's not like he didn't support homosexual couples, it's just he didn't want to see Bruce get hurt. Now, most worry about Flash getting hurt but what they don't know is Bruce has had his heart broken into bits and piece. I don't think he's ever put it back together. I am scared Flash will get bored and move on, leaving Bruce gathering his heart in the dust. As I look at Bruce sitting with Wally at the lunch table, two tables from mine, and see Wally reach out and grip Bruce's hand, I know I don't have to worry anymore

darkhavens June 8 2009, 08:42:10 UTC

Stargate Atlantis/Eureka, John/Rodney, Rodney and Nathan Stark share a history (POV Jack Carter)

daria234 June 8 2009, 08:55:20 UTC

Futurama, Bender/Fry, Leela knows they're a couple, Leela's POV

Closeted Robos dropsofviolet June 16 2009, 03:24:54 UTC

The thing about Bender and Fry trying to fake something is that they don't realize how stupid they actually are. It takes ten minutes for Leela to see through their facade, and that's an hour before she catches them in the broom closet, flailing about like the idiots she knows they are.

"We're sweeping!" Bender says, flailing his arms.

"In the closet!" Fry adds quickly, his voice high.

She slams the door on them. After a moment, Fry sighs.

"I think she bought it," he says.

"When you're finished sweeping the closet," Leela growls from outside the door, "clean the ship. There's still giant mosquitos squished on the windshield from our trip to RV-7, the vacation planet ( ... )

Re: Closeted Robos daria234 June 16 2009, 04:05:59 UTC

HAHAHHAHAHAHAHA!!!
Love it!

Thanks so much for writing this - the characters were spot on.

""We're sweeping!" Bender says, flailing his arms.
"In the closet!" Fry adds quickly, his voice high"

Yeah, that's them all right. Perfect dialogue LOL!

Re: Closeted Robos daria234 June 16 2009, 04:07:38 UTC

Yeah, the previous comment was from me not from 'anonymous,' sorry.

Anyway, awesomely funny fic!!!!!
Thanks again!

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hunters_retreat June 8 2009, 09:00:06 UTC

Dark Angel, Logan/Alec, hiding in plain sight (Joshua's POV :P)

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Re: Joshua knows hunters_retreat June 8 2009, 09:26:13 UTC

OMG! I love this! Tee hee hee... love how you were in Joshua's head like this! Awesome! Thank you thank you thank you!

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ctrokj June 8 2009, 18:57:22 UTC

Sam looked over at Dean and he just knew. He knew that after everything that had happened to them in all their years living that Dean was finally happy. Dean smiled more when he thought that Sam wasn’t looking. There was a light in his eyes that only showed when he was looking at Castiel ( ... )

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ctrokj June 10 2009, 02:24:52 UTC

Thank you. Glad I could get Sam right. :)