Tuesday: Silence

Nov 29, 2010 23:55

 Hello again! Today's theme is silence. Character introspectives, breaking silence, or no dialogue at all...however you want to interpret it!

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zekkass November 30 2010, 08:08:15 UTC
Supernatural, Lucifer/any, watch your tone (or I'll watch it for you)

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vacation in stockholm [1] ravenspear November 30 2010, 22:29:46 UTC
On the first day in the house, Dean screams and curses and takes an iron poker to Lucifer's face.

Lucifer just smiles as he catches Dean's wrist in a cold hand, and says softly "Mind your tone, Dean. Or I'll have to mind it for you."

Dean's never been good at minding his tone. Especially not around angels or monsters or authority figures, and the way things are looking, Lucifer is currently all three. "Fuck you, dickbag."

Lucifer's smile doesn't waver as he snaps Dean's wrist. "If you don't have anything nice to say, then it's better if you say nothing at all," he chides, voice warm and fond as he flexes his fingers, the broken bones in Dean's wrist grinding against each other, making Dean gasp and shake and very nearly sob.

---By the fourth week, Dean's learned to keep his mouth shut ( ... )

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vacation in stockholm [2] ravenspear November 30 2010, 22:30:59 UTC
Lucifer obviously doesn't believe in healing pneumonia the angel way, and instead insists on playing nursemaid as Dean lies bedridden and burning up with fever.

Dean's currently sitting up against the headboard, being fed like a fucking child, and he resents the fuck out of the whole thing.

"There we go, drink up," Lucifer soothes as he holds the bowl of chicken broth up to Dean's lips. "You need your fluids."

Dean dutifully drinks, and once he's done he flips down to lie awkwardly turned away from Lucifer and his smug fucking smiles and his stupid home remedies and the entire fucking domestic nightmare he's built specially just for Dean.

"That can't be comfortable, lying like that," Lucifer points out, and then his hands are on him, pulling and rearranging until Dean is lying comfortably, and Dean blames the fever for how he just wants to fucking cry.

"There, isn't that better?" Lucifer asks, running a blissfully cold hand through Dean's sweat-slick hair, and fuck, that's the best thing Dean's ever felt, and he can't help the ( ... )

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Re: vacation in stockholm [2] zekkass November 30 2010, 23:23:32 UTC
Brrr. V.v. nice. V.v. creepy. Excellent, as usual.

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Re: vacation in stockholm [2] ravenspear November 30 2010, 23:26:26 UTC
Thank you! :3

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Re: vacation in stockholm [2] tigerist December 1 2010, 10:46:00 UTC
this... wow.
I think I might start stalking your comment_fic.
actually, I'm pretty sure I will.

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Re: vacation in stockholm [2] ravenspear December 1 2010, 13:12:15 UTC
Hee! Thank you! X3

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Re: vacation in stockholm [2] pure_mornings December 1 2010, 21:18:17 UTC
I agree with zekkass but this is the only lucifer/anyone fic I have ever liked. It reads so realistically.

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Re: vacation in stockholm [2] ravenspear December 1 2010, 22:50:25 UTC
I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)

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