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Mittwoch - 3 Sentences

Jan 20, 2010 10:23

Hello, I'm still demonlord_dean and today, I'm even not in a rush so I hope I'll think of everything this time ( Read more... )

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Sweat and Sweet, R miya_morana January 20 2010, 10:27:24 UTC

Sam’s not sure exactly how they got there, how they got from Gabriel popping up to give them a hand to Gabriel’s hands on his body, his lips on his skin, his voice filling the air with sweet sweet words, all of which is driving Sam crazy with warmth and lust and want; Gabriel is a tease and Sam should have known that.

He’s all confused now, he doesn’t know where his body ends and where the archangel’s begin anymore and he’s not sure he even cares, he latches his lips on skin that tastes like candy and it’s soft and pliant under his tongue, sending shivers through his spin, or maybe that’s just Gabriel’s hand and body and whole being.

The air smells like electricity and sweat and power, like lightening and lust and, but above al there’s that sweetness, like candy, it smells like candy, and that’s just Gabriel, so Sam revels in it and in the taste and touch of the archangel above him, under him, in him, all over him and he grips on tight, because he’s never letting go of the intoxicating feeling of having Gabriel making him his, or of the sweet taste of sex and candy in his mouth.

Re: Sweat and Sweet, R kijikun January 20 2010, 13:11:09 UTC

Guh. You packed so much feeling into something so short. <3

Re: Sweat and Sweet, R miya_morana January 20 2010, 13:34:02 UTC

Thank you!

Your prompts are always exquisite and too tempting to resist. :)

Re: Sweat and Sweet, R kijikun January 20 2010, 13:35:03 UTC

I have evil plans if I win the auction for a fic from you, you know. BWAHHA. *cough*

Re: Sweat and Sweet, R miya_morana January 20 2010, 13:38:37 UTC

I think I just might be looking forward to your evil plans! :P

Re: Sweat and Sweet, R tiptoe39 January 20 2010, 13:21:33 UTC

UNF. :D

Re: Sweat and Sweet, R miya_morana January 20 2010, 13:35:17 UTC

Thanks! :D

Re: Sweat and Sweet, R daria234 January 20 2010, 18:26:31 UTC

Great fic! Love the imagery of this "The air smells like electricity and sweat and power, like lightening and lust "

Re: Sweat and Sweet, R miya_morana January 20 2010, 22:07:38 UTC

Thank you very much! :D

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