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Monday - Hurt/Comfort

Jan 04, 2010 07:37

Hello everyone!! I'm johnboy91719 and I'm here to guest host the first full week of comment fic for the new year!

To start off this week, I'm going with something that fits my mood after having had four days off work and having to go back. So, we'll do some hurt/comfort today. This can be anything from one character being severely injured to a minor injury to ( Read more... )

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johnboy91719 January 4 2010, 13:38:48 UTC

Heroes, Sylar/Peter, one of them catches a cold and the other takes care of the ill one

tiptoe39 January 4 2010, 19:46:33 UTC

"I just want you to know," Peter said, wringing out the warm washcloth and laying it over Sylar's forehead, "that I'm not here for you ( ... )

daria234 January 4 2010, 21:24:08 UTC

I like this so much!!

tiptoe39 January 4 2010, 21:28:03 UTC

Hee! Vengeful!Peter. Watch out for the man.

Thanks for reading, glad you liked!

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johnboy91719 January 4 2010, 13:39:07 UTC

One Life to Live, Oliver/Kyle, Oliver has a bad day and goes to drown himself in liquor, Kyle finds him

johnboy91719 January 4 2010, 13:39:32 UTC

SPN/author's choice, Dean/anyone, someone finds Dean beaten and bloody after a hunt

Filled! John POV, S1 ginzai January 4 2010, 15:16:37 UTC

"Dad, Dean's gone missing."

Dean was a goddamn idiot. It probably wasn't the kindest sentiment to feel when the boy was nine shades of banged up, blood puddling down his neck from one ear and a goose egg the size of John's fist tucked up behind the other, but hell if he had other words for his son right at the moment.

A series of voicemails from Sam had put John on this hunt. The first had been just as pissed and surly as ever, with barely a hint of the fear that would come with the later ones.

"I got the creature. Cold salted iron took it down and I burned it after but I can't find Dean. It took him and I can't find him. You need to come help me find him.He might have ignored it. Had ignored ones before with equally dire messages. He'd put aside his own panic when Sam had called to tell him about the rawhide, had refused to panic when Dean had been dying. But he'd been able to track his boys' progress that time, had been able to make sure they'd make their way to someone who could help a hell of a lot more than John ( ... )

Re: Filled! John POV, S1 hugglewolf January 4 2010, 18:26:38 UTC

Great fic. I can't help but detect a slight grudging from John in having to go get Dean (once he knows he's alive, if not well, and will recover).

Re: Filled! John POV, S1 ginzai January 4 2010, 19:10:13 UTC

I'm glad you liked it and thanks for commenting! I think John is less resentful and more very, very skilled at covering up his worry with anger. Anger's the more productive emotion and all. Fear and concern, especially since this is set in S1 and he feels he can't stick around, wouldn't help him. Or so he thinks. The Winchesters are many things, but emotionally available is usually not one of them... :D

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munnin_odanin January 4 2010, 13:43:57 UTC

DCU, Batman, the taste of his own blood

Writing this on Sudafed and Dayquil. >_> Probably not the best idea. sammage_art January 4 2010, 20:53:27 UTC

The focus whites out the pain, puts it on the back burner as he forces his body to press forward. At this juncture, he's forcing his body just to move at all and that is when the situation elevates to a new level of dangerous. Pride keeps him walking; keeps him from letting the disorientation overwhelm his senses until he's collapsed on the floor of the alleyway. Ten stories without a line. It was never the fall that killed. His shoulder is dislocated, his head bleeding beneath the cowl. Somewhere in his left hand, he can sense the hairline fractures in the many bones there ( ... )

Re: Writing this on Sudafed and Dayquil. >_> Probably not the best idea. daria234 January 4 2010, 21:28:15 UTC

Great one

Re: Writing this on Sudafed and Dayquil. >_> Probably not the best idea. sammage_art January 4 2010, 21:38:20 UTC

Thanks very much! :] I'm glad it came out somewhat coherent.

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munnin_odanin January 4 2010, 13:44:19 UTC

DCU, Dick/Tim, it hurts more to see him in pain

Chest Pains, Dick/Tim, PG ms_duck January 12 2010, 16:31:16 UTC

He tries his hardest to hold onto Tim through the racking sobs. It's a difficult prospect, made worse by Damian jumping all over the place.

But he can do this. He can hold him together just like this. He can.

His chest aches though. Because Tim is in pain and he can't really make it better, not right away. It always hurts more when Tim is pain.

Always and it's a distressing thought. He doesn't want to think about what that might or might not mean right now.

He plants a kiss on his forehead and rocks them. Maybe that will ease something.

Re: Chest Pains, Dick/Tim, PG munnin_odanin January 12 2010, 23:53:30 UTC

Duck you spoil me. Dark and painful and just perfect. Thank you!

Re: Chest Pains, Dick/Tim, PG ms_duck January 13 2010, 00:04:06 UTC

'Cause it's fun. 8D

I'm glad you like it! :)

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