Heroes fic: The Place Between Dreams And Waking

[comiskey]

 
She dreams of his kiss and wakes up still feeling the pressure of his lips on hers.  It’s torture of the worst kind.  He’ll never kiss her when she’s awake and she’s not even supposed to want him to.  They’re family - technically - and it’s the most screwed up thing Claire’s ever known.

She raises her fingertips to her mouth and tries to

Comments

[atlantis2_04]

***If he could visit her in her dreams…***

such amazing thought!!!
this story is so romantic and so beautiful than left me melting...:)

[comiskey]

I'm so glad you enjoyed the story! Thanks for the feedback.

[fiddlings]

I loved it! I could very much see this happening. I love this look into Claire's dreams and thoughts; the way they merged until they were almost one. The idea that Peter could have been in charge of those dreams is amazing.

The way he interrupted her was perfect.

Fantastic job!

[comiskey]

Thanks so much! I'm happy that the merging of the dreams and thoughts worked well and that you liked how he interrupted her :)

[nayden]

Yay for taking a break, that's was so beautiful and very imaginative. The best kind of fic. I absolutely LOVED it ^_^

[comiskey]

Break's are definitely wonderful. I'm really happy that you loved the fic. Thanks a lot for the compliments!

[nayden]

You're welcome. I really did love it. I love your writing, hope you can post something again real soon ^_^

[comiskey]

Aw thanks. You're a sweetheart. Hopefully I'll be able to get around to writing something soon. I might have to write a Chuck fic before I go back to Heroes, though, because I just got hooked on that show! :)

[dreamingwriter]

I love that Claire didn't remember their conversation so she makes it up. It's a very realistic thing to do espically when half asleep and if asked I can tell you of a few times I've made up conversations for dreams. ^^ Beautiful writing as always!

[comiskey]

I'm glad you liked how Claire made up the conversation when she couldn't remember it. It's definitely something I do as well! Thanks so much for the comment and I'm really happy you liked the fic. :)

[loner_angel]

That was beautiful. I wonder if Milo's hair is really that soft? Or what's left of it. *sighs*

[comiskey]

I like to imagine that his hair (or what's left of it, as you rightfully pointed out, lol) would be soft. :) Thanks for the comment and I'm glad you enjoyed the fic!