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Cherry Cravings

Apr 04, 2006 01:23

Title: Cherry Cravings
Author: Tas (tasyfa)
Fandom: Green Day RPS - Billie Joe Armstrong/Mike Dirnt
Characters: Billie/Mike, Billie/Adrienne, implied Mike/Adrienne
Prompt: 15: Food Play
Word Count: 1,111
Rating: just barely R
Disclaimer: I own only the words; the people own themselves.
Author's Notes: Silly fun for the 50kinkyways challenge. ( My challenge table.)
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Comments 30

edgiko April 4 2006, 04:44:29 UTC

I'm sorry..I can't help but to LAUGH at this piece. It's sooo funny..... especially with the whole Mike sunday and the hose thing. XD

tasyfa April 4 2006, 05:37:04 UTC

*glee* Don't be sorry; it's supposed to be funny!

stumphed April 4 2006, 04:54:47 UTC

*spent the entirety of this thing laughing*

Except the one part.

Mike shrank back on the bench as Adrienne advanced on him, slightly freaked out by the intense look on her face and the way her gaze was riveted to his groin. In his head, Please don't hurt me, alternated with, Please don't take him away.

That made me stop laughing real fast. Great lines. I like discovering the dynamics that exist in the various fics people write. I didn't know if Adie had ever seen them together or if Billie was running around with Mike behind her back or if the three of them often fucked. It makes it interesting to be handed something like Adie coming in before we're given the info as to whether or not it's okay.

tasyfa April 4 2006, 05:39:42 UTC

Yeah that was part of the point. And truthfully, I didn't know she hadn't seen them together before until Mike brought it up. *shrugs* I'm glad the rest made you laugh! I'm always more leery of humourous pieces b/c my sense of humour is a tad whacko. *grins*

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tasyfa April 4 2006, 05:40:30 UTC

It just begged for that, really it did. xD Thanks!

rei_jaganshi April 4 2006, 08:01:45 UTC

Mmm...mental images...making me hungry....that was brilliant!

tasyfa April 5 2006, 03:31:02 UTC

Thanks! :)

cosmicdancer April 4 2006, 10:42:55 UTC

It's funny, everyone laughs at a different part! I liked when Mike was teasing Billie about being pussywhipped.

But I truly do love your characterizations, even though this is one particular kink I back away from (maybe it's just too damn wholesome! XDD). It was presented in an amusing enough manner that it didn't matter.

tasyfa April 5 2006, 03:35:49 UTC

Food is a silly, fun kink to me (unless I'm watching Nine and a Half Weeks, anyway!). Thanks for the comps on the characterizations.