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[comeonbabyfunky]

Title: Two Hundred and Ninety-Eight (Another Skyline Disappears)
Fandom/Pairing: JE, Ryo/Koyama
Rating: G
Summary: It's on the covers of all the tabloids. Too wild, should have never debuted, Johnny's mistake... Kanjani8 is put on hiatus.
A/N: Originally posted here as part of je_ficgames.

Comments

[sanjihan]

Saaaaaaaaaaaaad! So sad! And interesting. OH KOYAMA!! :( I loved this. I need to stop reading your fics so I can properly comment when my brain is on.

[the_suit_case]

Thanks for reading this!

[sanjihan]

A slightly more proper comment. I love this 'might have been.' I had never really thought of the reverse and that's why I found this so interesting. It was beautifully written and a wonderful read.

He pets Nishikido's hair until Nishikido uncurls his body and presses his nose against Koyama's collarbone.
And
Koyama breathes in and stills, his fingers resting in between the notches of Nishikido's spine.
I really love your imagery in this story and quote these as perfect specimens.

"You leaving NEWS could end everything I've ever dreamed of." Koyama lays on his back and Nishikido can see Koyama's heart breaking on his face.

"You'll find a new dream," Nishikido says.
AGH. RYO YOU BASTARD. That's what I kept thinking. How could you watch Koyama hurt like that and STILL break him?

It was just...heart-rending. But so beautiful that I didn't even mind. Thank you.

[the_suit_case]

I wrote this as part of je_ficgames and was on Team What-If; all the fics on my team were kind of like this, one thing being different, how would it affect the future. This was actually a pinch hit, but I liked how it came out better than my original, I had a lot of fun writing it. I still think it's one of the better things I've written in JE, SO thanks for the lovely comment! I really didn't expect you to come back and comment again!

[sanjihan]

It's 'cause I really liked it. :D Expect more comments in the future on the rest of your NewS fics because I love them all. I'm just really lazy so they take me a while, lol.

[the_suit_case]

You're too sweet. : )))