Team Day, Prompt: Collateral Damage, Brad is a Sneaky Recon Motherfucker

Jul 13, 2010 19:35

Title: Brad is a Sneaky Recon Motherfucker
By: passionofmindPrompt: Collateral Damage - Damage that is unintended or incidental to the intended outcome ( Read more... )

challenge: gk battle, gk battle - team day

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hypertwink July 14 2010, 03:20:13 UTC
Cat-and-mouse recon style! This was fun and breezy and very entertaining.

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passionofmind August 9 2010, 04:28:56 UTC
Thank you, I'm so glad you enjoyed it! :)

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skyearth85 July 14 2010, 11:28:09 UTC
a IN-Theatre with little drama.
Love it, love it, really loved it.

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passionofmind August 9 2010, 04:29:48 UTC
I felt like writing something light for a change, I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)

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indyhat July 14 2010, 19:38:59 UTC
Stafford will take the loss of Mercedes and Candi harder than Nate will.

This made me laugh a lot.

“Sergeant Colbert is detonating ordinance to make greater Baghdad safe for children again. My hero.” Ray clutches his chest.

Heheh. Ray.

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passionofmind August 9 2010, 04:30:30 UTC
Oh, YAY. I love making people laugh. Ray is the best isn't he? Thanks!

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oxoniensis July 14 2010, 23:28:55 UTC
I do love stories set in canon, so we can picture the events, just those subtle little differences leading to something more.

The Iceman knows what you’re doing before you even decide to do it. That’s some straight up Jedi mind trick fuckery if you ask me, sir.”

<333

eta: I forgot to say - so much love for the title! Hee.

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passionofmind August 9 2010, 04:31:38 UTC
Ray is a bit of a wise ass, isn't he? That's why we love him.

Hee! Thanks :) It was a working title, but my team and betas liked it so much I kept it.

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lunasky July 15 2010, 01:46:02 UTC
Hee! This was way too much fun. So many great lines:

Let them be discovered. It won’t be the poorest judgment call made in this occupation, not by a long shot.

I loved how you kept just enough of the canon to make it real, and yet still fit it in with your story. A wonderful read. :)

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passionofmind August 9 2010, 04:32:28 UTC
Thanks Luna! :) I'm so glad you enjoyed.

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