YAGKYAS 2010 Good Cookies!

Dec 17, 2010 16:34

Hi all! The mods are working on YAGKYAS to go live on Monday, but in the meantime, here's this year's Good Cookie post!


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Re: Fick/Person, college, 3/3 anonymous December 18 2010, 07:07:36 UTC
October 23, approximately 73 calls and texts later: Ray Person gets some.

Even though Nate seemed to be doing his damned best to make Ray lose his mind, Ray refused to fall behind. He pushed his hands into Nate's back pockets, palming and stroking that fuckin' A-plus ass. Nate shuddered and his mouth on Ray's neck went sloppy.

"Fuck, Ray," he gasped. He pushed Ray back into the wall until his shoulder-blades protested and his dick got harder.

Ray groaned and bit Nate's ear keenly. "Please," he said, his breath jagged. "Fuck me through the floor. Come in my ass and eat it out."

"You want me to fuck you?" Nate asked, surprised. Trust Ivy League to take a little dirty talk seriously. Still...

"I'm feeling generous," Ray said. He pressed his thigh between Nate's legs and gripped his hips tightly, probably blurring the line between pain and pleasure. "You'll be spreading 'em for me soon enough."

Nate took a step back his cheeks flushed and his mouth ripened red. Before Ray could complain, he began to unbutton his jeans.

“Shit, that’s nice,” breathed Ray as Nate pulled out his cock. “C’mere.”

He dragged Nate closer by the arm, and spit into his own palm. He teased at Nate’s slit before jacking him off with long, earnest strokes that had him shaking. “You like that? You gonna come for me, Nate?” he said hotly.

“Y-yeah,” said Nate, his breath stuttering, before his eyes nearly rolled back into his head and he came. It splattered on his shirt and Ray’s fingers. Grinning, he smeared the come on Nate’s lower lip.

Nate rolled his eyes but licked his lips anyway. “I thought you said you’d be good,” he said, still sounding a little out of breath.

“You knew I couldn’t and you went out with me anyway,” Ray said smugly. He fingered his fly pointedly.

Nate kissed Ray and unzipped his Levis. “Yeah, I did.”

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Re: Fick/Person, college, 3/3 queeniegalore December 18 2010, 07:49:45 UTC
Oh dear god, this was amazing. I love Nate/Ray, they are totally my secret favourite.

And this bit. Holy God in heaven.

Nate rolled his eyes but licked his lips anyway. “I thought you said you’d be good,” he said, still sounding a little out of breath.

“You knew I couldn’t and you went out with me anyway,” Ray said smugly. He fingered his fly pointedly.

Nate kissed Ray and unzipped his Levis. “Yeah, I did.”

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Re: Fick/Person, college, 3/3 theburningdoll December 18 2010, 08:01:55 UTC
(Why did I anon? No one else did *facepalm*)

Nate/Ray is my crack!OTP. There needs to be so much more fic.

I'm so glad you liked it :) Your comment made me very happy.

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Re: Fick/Person, college, 3/3 ringhelediel December 18 2010, 08:30:53 UTC
Ray has some balls!(and a real, demanding dirty mouth)

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Re: Fick/Person, college, 3/3 theburningdoll December 18 2010, 18:00:31 UTC
That he does... :)

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Re: Fick/Person, college, 3/3 kubis December 18 2010, 11:30:02 UTC
Oh, Ray, you managed to score Nate Fick after that disaster, I salute you, sir.

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Re: Fick/Person, college, 3/3 theburningdoll December 18 2010, 18:01:33 UTC
Lol, yeah, he probably just talked Nate into submission.

:)

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Re: Fick/Person, college, 3/3 girl_called_sun December 18 2010, 14:31:45 UTC
This is hilarious and smoking hot like fire - phew!

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Re: Fick/Person, college, 3/3 theburningdoll December 18 2010, 18:01:48 UTC
Aw, thank you! <3

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Re: Fick/Person, college, 3/3 meeks00 December 18 2010, 22:38:32 UTC
I just loved this! Ray is obnoxious yet still a Ray we love, and Nate is a scary badass who is also charmed by Ray's craziness. And then there's an exasperated Brad, who is always an awesome kind of Brad. Thanks for sharing!

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Re: Fick/Person, college, 3/3 theburningdoll December 18 2010, 23:12:36 UTC
You're welcome, and thank you for the lovely review :) Writing all three of them was v. enjoyable ;)

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Re: Fick/Person, college, 3/3 puckling December 24 2010, 05:59:11 UTC
Nate rolled his eyes but licked his lips anyway. “I thought you said you’d be good,” he said, still sounding a little out of breath.

“You knew I couldn’t and you went out with me anyway,” Ray said smugly. He fingered his fly pointedly.

Nate kissed Ray and unzipped his Levis. “Yeah, I did.”

Awwwwww, bless. I bet the awesome sex and general Rayness makes up for it anyway.

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Re: Fick/Person, college, 3/3 theburningdoll December 27 2010, 07:26:58 UTC
♥ Thank you! (Jeez, what a late reply to your comment. Sorry!)

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Re: Fick/Person, college, 3/3 spirited_lizard January 1 2011, 18:36:20 UTC
This was really good and really hot! :P

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