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xennai March 23 2008, 14:43:47 UTC
Very cute and well done. I like the comparison of Vaan's past to his present towards the end.

Vaan/Penelo is becoming a sorely ignored ship, which makes me sad because they are my OTP. D:

(I have the urge to call Reks the Sun-King now from your fourth sentence.)

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colourfuless March 24 2008, 18:09:26 UTC
I know! Poor Vaan/Penelo. People don't give their cuteness enough credit, honestly.

LOL! Reks the Sun-King... There is a plot twist waiting to happen...

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yume_no_hikari March 23 2008, 20:53:30 UTC
aw wow that was almost ridiculously cute.

i love the way it starts, stylistically - it cuts right to the point of how things were in a very simple way, something that i think is more effective than long winded descriptions sometimes. Vaan was kind of adorably clueless, in his very Vaan-like way.

Also i love the one sentence you mentioned Balthier in, because of course, Balthier knows all - the whole time i was playing the game I was always screaming "BALTHIER KNOWS ALL! HE WILL PWN YOU WITH HIS WISDOM!!!!"

Very cute.

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colourfuless March 24 2008, 18:11:51 UTC
I completely agree. I haven't completely finished the game yet (almost there~) but it's always seemed to me that Balthier knows exactly what the crap is going on. It makes you feel so safe with him~ <3.

I'm glad you liked it :D.

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