Comments | colourful_love: Vanilla Love

colourful_love

Vanilla Love

Dec 20, 2008 17:23

Tile : Vanilla Love
Pairing : Onkey
Summary : Earrrrrrllllllllyyyyyy Christmas Pressie for Minnie (KyuhyunLover3) who asked me to write this in the first place. Key gets jealous when Onew sings Vanilla Love with Lee Hyun Ji.

( You do know I'm only 15, right? )

Comments 15

sallysync December 20 2008, 12:07:09 UTC

That's sweet!!!! I love ONKEY!!!

kyuhyunlover3 December 20 2008, 13:22:30 UTC

btw i got a random story up on my journal :p

kyuhyunlover3 December 20 2008, 13:22:10 UTC

i stopped by here anyways...AND I ALREADY TOLD U THIS WAS WHAT I EXPECTING~~~~ <3 UMMA SARANGHAE~~ ^-^

lily_ina January 30 2009, 04:14:13 UTC

Oh~ That was so sweet~

I was sooo scared at first because I am writing a fic based on the song 'Vanilla Love' but it's not the same...so...it's okay right?

But your fic was soo cute~ I love it when Onew tries to 'comfort Key' it's sooo sweet~

Thank you for sharing~ I loved it~

colourful_love January 30 2009, 10:08:17 UTC

Thank you!! I hope your fic comes out soon!! i'll be there to read it!!^^

romanticgraze January 30 2009, 04:24:17 UTC

That was so cute ♥

theia88 January 30 2009, 04:35:31 UTC

Whoa!! I think I've read this before and i'm so glad you post it to OnKey Comm..hehe.

Key jealous was so cute!! And i love how onew comforted key here...

"I never see sexy woman. I only see sexy key"

Aaaawww...dubu, you make me die!!!

"If i don't see you for one day, what the first thing i say when i do?" onew nuzzled key's neck
"..I want a kiss" key turned his head, leaning it againts Onew
"Exactly." Onew placed a soft kiss on key's hair

ahahahaha! This was to sweet!!!

Write more please...i love OnKey fics!

colourful_love January 30 2009, 10:09:34 UTC

Ahaha I'm glad!! You gave me such a nice comment!^^ I love Onkey too!!!!Did you read it on winglin??Haha. And jealous Key is awsome!