FANFIC- OF PHANTOMS & POLTERGEITS CH 7, Part 2

Apr 05, 2010 00:24

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Spiritus Krikos was not a normal circus, nor was it your run-of-the-mill freak show. There were some ‘real’ oddities in the circus. The main attraction that had made Krikos famous was the Huay Chivo[4]. People from countries far and near came to see the creature. It was a rumor among the ( Read more... )

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razzlie April 5 2010, 07:31:26 UTC
OMFG

LIKE I TOLD CHU IN MSN: YOUR BEST WORK EVA ♥

CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAP

WANNA SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT

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colourbine April 6 2010, 00:17:03 UTC
thanks mah cat ^^ so sweet :)

and you know what happens next ;D

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razzlie April 6 2010, 00:38:48 UTC
mah job foo ;D ♥

I does ;D but just saying for extra emphasis

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colourbine April 13 2010, 01:26:59 UTC
so sweet &hearts

:) mkay ;0

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serebronaga April 5 2010, 10:46:55 UTC
Won't you come home, Bill Bailey, won't you come home?

What a tweeeest :O

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colourbine April 6 2010, 00:15:53 UTC
COOKIE FOR YOU!!!!! xD I honestly didn't remember that part. I had to go watch that part again. Then again that butterfly never made any sense to me as a child.
Your memory and you for that matter never cease to amaze me ^^

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serebronaga April 6 2010, 00:31:00 UTC
He never made sense to me either till I watched it again years later and went, 'Oh! He's singing bits of songs and poetry. I are smart.' Fear ye not, ye are not alone.

I think Arthur would approve of references to unicorns were he in perhaps a better position. Sorry bro, maybe later :D

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colourbine April 6 2010, 00:59:20 UTC
Oh, I need to rewatch it now...LOLOL, I would thinking along the same lines with the exact words and bad grammar xD

I think he would. I'm sure once he gets past this, he'll get to fully enjoy the wonderful unicorn reference. Knowing him, he probably read the book and watched the movie countless of times xD

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takiphevoli April 6 2010, 04:07:42 UTC
Dude. Did not see this coming. At all. O.o Ahhh I want to know what happens next... *eagerly awaits the next chapter*

(Just a semi-quick question, though. Last chapter, you said that Seychelles wasn't kidnapped or anything, so does that mean the evil dark spirit thing just took her soul or something of the like, thus putting her in this situation? And if so, should I assume that the same thing happened to all the other the people at the ball as well, since Arthur's in here too? You don't have to spoil anything, I just want to know if I'm following this correctly ^^)

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colourbine April 6 2010, 05:35:56 UTC
It seems that I have caught everyone by surprise. ^^ And you'll find out soon....

(well, that will be explained not in the next chapter but in the chapter after that so Ch 9, but if you really want to know I won't mind telling you ^^ being the little sister of the author has it's advantages doesn't it? xD)

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takiphevoli April 6 2010, 14:29:12 UTC
^^ Can't wait!

(I do love spoilers~ And it most certainly does :D)

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colourbine April 9 2010, 01:01:16 UTC
cute 83

(oh, I love them too. >w< if you still want to know, I'll pm you the dets. ;) )

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heartbreakhavoc April 9 2010, 04:20:45 UTC
Squuueee~ :D squeeeeeee~ updaaate squeeee~

-cough- Sechelles! <3 She's such a sweetheart! and the line There was no sound of cars stuck in traffic, no children laughing and playing, no dogs barking at each other, no screeching cats and … no Arthur. owo it made me sad..no Arthur. You poor dear. To have a crush on someone who likes someone else, that must suck ( ... )

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colourbine April 9 2010, 22:35:05 UTC
Yes, update!

:) I'm glad you enjoyed how I portray her. D: Awww don't be sad. Arthur ended up being there after all. Yes, it must suck to be Sechelles D:

;D Everyone keeps saying that. Looks like I still got some tricks up my sleeve . xD I WANT OBSERVATIONS -cough- I mean, Yeah he can be a sweetie when he wants to be. ^^

LOL, yay you got the reference! -gives cookie- The harpie creeped me out as well o.o;; well, I wasn't intending on refering to the movie, it just sort of happened xD

The next update should be up in a week or so. ^^ go sleep, hon. -pats back-

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heartbreakhavoc April 11 2010, 22:07:27 UTC
I like your Sechelles X) It was still sad though, how much she missed him ;x; Maybe she hopes that if they ever broke up, she could catch him on the rebound.

You're just good like that, apparently XD Observatiooons~ really, you're so good I can't find much in this! must..read..between the lines.... Arthur is a sweatheart/romantic in disguise as a gentleman by day/pirate by night XD

SWEET -eats cookie- I'm great like that >) That harpie was so mean and vicious! creeped the crud out of me..though I felt bad for the poor old lion in the cage..poor baby. It's a neat movie, it deserves the reference? :)

Yaaay X) I shall awake semi-patiently -wags tail- :) Yeah, I need a better sleep schedule xp

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colourbine April 22 2010, 01:31:01 UTC
Thanks ;) Maybe? But that would mean that Artie and Alfie would have to break-up :(

Yes, finally others see the awesome that is me xD D8 LE GASP. But you always have observations. Read in between the lines woman! Read as if your life depended on it~ Pirate by night! I like that ;)

It was. It freaked me out as well so did the weird troll woman. Me too! Even if he was being fed and stuff. He just looked so sad in that cage :(

It's fine ;) You sleep when you need to sleep ;)

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