Our First... 4

[colorfulkitten]

Our First Seperation…
Rated: R (for blood, little gore and suggestive sexual situations)
**PLEASE READ** Author’s Note:  First off, I’m so sorry this chapter took so long to finish.  I also want to say that this chapter contains things that some readers may find disturbing, so I do apologize if it grosses anyone out, use discretion etc etc..  This

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[tigon_0]

That was an awsome read. It was good, and I'm not a grammer nazi so I'm not gonna ding you on it :P. Smut really>? I was expecting thats at all, coming from a titale such as "our first...", wasn't expecting it at all. Especially after that drinking scene infront of the whole village, then later while there in bed. OR earlier when Fang was admint about not doing something till after Vanille's big hunt...I can't wait for the next chapter now O.O. Good luck and keep the good humor too, it's always a joy to read when someone adds some real humor to their stories. R/R later!

[colorfulkitten]

Haha, thanks. :) Ya I know right?! Who needs a smut scene anyway?! I'll just make Fang be forever sexually frustrated by Vanille. *nod nod* I'm making myself sound sadistic, HAHA. XD I shall try my best to keep a touch of humor around though ;)

[tigon_0]

I just have to add this, I think it's funny that alot of people are noticeing that your ending your chapters with them sleeping together. Scratch that, it's hilarious XD

[colorfulkitten]

Lol, ya, I've been questioned about the fact on FF.net. XD (I'm cutting out all the smut scenes, DUH!!) :D

[tigon_0]

*0* NOOOOOOOOOO!!! I must have missed the sex scene when they first met in orphange as children. *shakes head* They've been going at it scenes childhood, no wounder pre-teen prego's at an all time high! Good thing their lesbians....

[colorfulkitten]

LOL, NONONO XD not when they were kids! I didn't mean that far back! XD *burns all those thoughts*

[tigon_0]

but the cut-off was so -OH GOD I GOT THE PICTURE IN MY HEAD *burns*

[colorfulkitten]

ROFL, think happy thoughts! XD Oh hey it's Light! Wait, what is that she's doing to Fang in the corner? o -o And what's Vanille doing with her bind rod!?!

[tigon_0]

Okay missy, you finish this up and then YOU tell us what Vanille's going to be doing with her bind rod to Light, who is doing something in the corner with Fang. ;), oh and don't you dare skip out on all the good juicy details for the next chapter!

[colorfulkitten]

Ehhh?! D: I've already got my next project lined up though! XD Must Do Drawing!! X3 Lol. Hmm, juicy you say? > .> I'll think about it :3
"they humped each other *orgasm moan* the end"
It's finished! :D (just kidding! rofl!)

[tigon_0]

heh, speaking of drawing, it's almost done. Just forgot one major thing...I have noting for the back ground, it's all white with Fang on a bed....so... can i ask for an Idea? I don't know what the walls look like in the Oerba village.

[colorfulkitten]

Hmm, it's hard to say without knowing the layout of the drawing at this point. I couldn't describe Oerba if I wanted to, lol. Um, maybe just a simple bedroom layout, nightstand etc., an open window with starry sky? * -* Um, lol, that probably doesn't help at all!

[tigon_0]

aw well it was worth a try :P