Fic - "My Life Would Suck Without You"
Title: My Life Would Suck Without You
Author: colonel_bastard
Characters/Fandom: Megamind, Metro Man, cameo from Roxanne. Megamind [dur].
Word Count: 4,734
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Metro Man discovers that Megamind's feet are... rather sensitive.
Warnings: Slash, foot play, foot worship, foot job--- basically, YES I HAVE A FOOT FETISH.
Notes: Sequel to my ( Read more... )
Author: colonel_bastard
Characters/Fandom: Megamind, Metro Man, cameo from Roxanne. Megamind [dur].
Word Count: 4,734
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Metro Man discovers that Megamind's feet are... rather sensitive.
Warnings: Slash, foot play, foot worship, foot job--- basically, YES I HAVE A FOOT FETISH.
Notes: Sequel to my ( Read more... )
Oh god that was SO WORTH THE WAIT!! (not that it took very long ,but I'm just impatient like that!)
Ung! I LOVED the clothed thing! And I loved the way Megz lured him there, and the awkwardness of the whole thing, and how they both had to find their footing with each other.
Your foot sucking is SUPERB! The little details were unbelievably hot (esp pressing his tongue in the space between the big toe ...NGH!) And not letting him touch himself? rawr!
and omg, WHO'S YOUR MAN? METRO MAN? (whoops, I was so excited I think I flailed and this comment got posted before i was done!
Anyhoo, WHO'S YOU MAN, METRO MAN? I totally snorfled out lout and my husband and children demanded to know what the hell was so funny. :D
Oh crap! I am totes late for work here.
I am going to go to work, and then I am going to come home and read this WITHOUT my family milling about and then I am going to comment properly.
suffice to say that I have a huge girl woody, and I am so excited that you've left this open for many, many sequels to come! Squeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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Told you it'd be awkward. ^_^ And I'm quite pleased to hear you comment on certain details--- I'm rather fond of the "don't touch yourself" bit myself. And by "rather fond" I mean I LOVE THAT SHIT. XD
Aww, yeah, he's the man. ;D Sorry I triggered a family-alerting snorfle, though--- oh way, NO I'M NOT. ^u^
This is already a proper comment for me. I mean, how could I not love a comment that contains the phrase "I have a huge girl woody." XD
There will be manyyyyyy sequels. <3
SMUT EXCHANGE = FLAWLESS VICTORY
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Oh man, oh man, oh man, ME LIKEY! I really love the pacing of the whole thing. And although it's more relaxed and slower than the first one, it really mirrors the way the the smut is framed.
I'm a total 'first time' whore, and although this isn't their 'first', the lack of relationship and the awkwardness and shyness really keep that feeling alive, and it SO works for me.
I don't have a foot fetish per se, but I really do like feet, and find them expressive and as sexy as any other part of the body, and I LOVE that Metro Man shoved THE ENTIRE THING in his mouth! The relative size difference is also a turn on for me, and Imma guessin' it's a go for you too. ;)
Okay, you don't need me to write you a novel here. suffice to say that i really loved it, BOTH read throughs!
Love the cute little fake swears, and the Motherfucker too! ;)
and really liked the line about him wanted to check his crotch when roxanne looks at him, but resisting!!
My only crit: although it works really well, Having Megamind say "Hello there!" to Metz' boner, it sort of contradicts the whole Ollo canon thang. Of course, in the movie, Minion's first line to Megamind is "Well, hello good looking", so yeah, if they can contradict canon, why the hell can't we?
No pressure, of course, but I'm working on a hand pic right now, with a DEF implication of a blow job. :D I know you have RL stuff to do, but I'm sure I"m not the only one waiting on pins and needles for the next installment.
Lovely work hon! It was a PLEASURE exchanging porn with you! <3 <3 <3
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I feel like all of my MM/MM fics are going to be this ridiculous voyage of discovery for both of them, so be ready for lots more shyness and awkwardness from both parties. XD
HAHAHA yes. Yes I was very pleased when I realized that Metro Man could probably fit that whole damn foot in his mouth. I love ALL the differences between them, but especially the size and the STRENGTH difference!! The fact that Metro Man can topple buildings and then he lets teeny little Megamind drag him down to the floor--- HOT. 8)
...OMG HAHAHA. I TOTALLY FORGOT THE "OLLO" THING. Um.... um... maybe he knows how to say hello in conversation but he just gets confused when he answers the phone and I don't know I'm really just pulling this out of my ass. XDDD
Wellllll, if I find your pic particularly inspiring (and I often do, lol), we'll see if the muse strikes.... ;D
*salutes!* <3 <3 <3
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I even named our pet goose Dr. D and true to form, he's a fucking asshole.
Speaking of porn ...
If I may make one *teeny* request, for you to add in an upcoming fic ...
I am DYING to see skinny glabrous blue dood COMPLETELY get off on the muscular hairy chest of Metz. A little fur worship. ***siiiiiigh*****
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And can we just agree that the song "My Nemesis" works pretty well for another hero/villain pairing of ours?? HMMM?? XD
UNF, Metro Man is such a BEAR, how could I RESIST. If I didn't already have a total hard-on for his chest, your last piece of art would have sealed the deal. FUR WORSHIP IS A DEFINITE YES. 8D
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http://tripperfunster.deviantart.com/art/UNF-196564580
/douchey Hal quote
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