Fic - "Might As Well Face It (You're Addicted to Love)"

[colonel_bastard]

Title: Might As Well Face It (You're Addicted to Love)
Author: colonel_bastard
Characters/Fandom: Megamind, Metro Man, cameo from Roxanne. Megamind [dur].
Word Count: 3,554
Rating: R
Summary: Metro Man's first attempt to make the game more interesting gets a little out of hand.
Warnings: Slash, dubcon, breathplay, frot. A spicy combination!
Notes: More

Comments

[tripperfunster]

OH
MY
FUCKING
GOD!

I am seriously in love with you! That was so fucking fantastic!

Judge Judy vs Nightcourt! I died!
Metz fascination with 'normal' mortals and mundane bodily functions was a great angle!

And the strangling? Ho Jeez! Breath play isn't really my 'thing' but that was incredibly hot and believable!

And I really should have seen the second "What's it feel like?( out of breath) coming, but I totally didn't and it was SO satisfying! I also love the giggling and the languid after glow.

THANK YOU FOR NOT FADING TO BLACK!

Oh, loved the messy hair btw. It would seems he's not TOTALLY invulnerable.

One crit: (and it's probably just me being dumb): Who touched who's crotch first? Did Metroman touch his OWN crotch? Or did he touch Megz' crotch? That's the trouble with slash, all the 'he' 'he' 'he' can get confusing. (that's the ONLY trouble with slash, mind ...)

Oh, thank you for writing this, it was so great!

[tripperfunster]

Okay, after re-reading, it's quite clear who is touching whom. I think i was just excited and was skipping ahead.

The more I read this fic, the more clever I find it! Some of your vernacular is really outstanding! You must write a lot.

[colonel_bastard]

Awww, yay, thank you so much! Such generous praise! You thrill me. ^_^

I really appreciate that you took the time to pick out some of your favorite bits. I love it when people do that! I'm all about the details, and I'm quite a big fan of that messy hair myself. :D

Hey, I made a promise, didn't I? No fade to black on my next fic, and I intended to deliver. You're very welcome. ;)

Hilariously, I got your first comment early this morning and actually did a quick edit--- I added some possessives to clarify the touching business! So it's not just you skipping ahead the first time, I actually did change it for the sake of specificity. I wanted to thank you for leaving such a helpful note--- it definitely needed to be fixed, and I'm grateful that you brought it to my attention! <3

Thank you so much, I'm so glad you enjoy it! I'm working to become a writer full-time, so, yeah, it's safe to say that I write a lot, haha.

[tripperfunster]

Oh THANK GOD! When I re-read it today, I was like ... WTF? That is totally clear, why the hell did I not get it last night? (of course, it was 2am, so ...)

also? As I've had some time to think about this fic today, (and God help me, I've thought about it a bit too much) the thought of Metz SUCKING on Megz' adams apple while he's moaning is just about the hottest thing I think I've ever read. Trufax.

What is at about that skinny blue throat that is so complelling?

Oddly enough, I am writing my own MM/MM fic right now. I sat down to write a Warden/Meg fic, and uh ... yeah, it never even got close.

This one is more wangsty than porny, but hopefully it turns out.

WRITE MOAR! You make good pornz

[colonel_bastard]

Haha, sorry to give you a spook like that. I was going to tell you I fixed it, but then you commented again before I could! XD

OH MAN. That is my FAVORITE PART of the fic and you are the FIRST person to comment on it. I am obsessed with that skinny blue throat. I'M SO GLAD YOU LIKED IT TOO. *______*

If your MM/MM piece is anywhere as good as your last fic, then I await it with great interest~ Also, I have a long plane ride tomorrow, which is usually prime pornz-writing time for me--- much to the horror of the seatmates who foolishly read over my shoulder. XD

[tripperfunster]

http://tripperfunster.deviantart.com/art/Air-Oh-teek-asphyxiation-193923012

[colonel_bastard]

*EXPLODES*