Fic - "Smoke and Mirrors"
Title: Smoke and Mirrors
Author: colonel_bastard
Characters/Fandom: Basil, Ratigan. The Great Mouse Detective.
Word Count: 4,450
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Ratigan reconsiders an old opinion and forms a new habit, one that will be quite difficult to break.
Warnings: SO MUCH SMOKING, sexual situations, general desecration of beloved Disney characters.
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Author: colonel_bastard
Characters/Fandom: Basil, Ratigan. The Great Mouse Detective.
Word Count: 4,450
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Ratigan reconsiders an old opinion and forms a new habit, one that will be quite difficult to break.
Warnings: SO MUCH SMOKING, sexual situations, general desecration of beloved Disney characters.
Notes ( Read more... )
*In a thicket a safe distance from the police, Ratigan lays Basil on the ground and quickly pulls open jacket, waistcoat, and shirt to assess the damage. To his amazement, he sees that the blade went awry--- rather than bury itself in the detective’s heart, it skirted across the length of his chest, leaving a gash that, while ugly, is by no means fatal. Basil’s stillness, which Ratigan had initially attributed to a mortal blow, is in fact the result of the blow his head sustained when he hit the ground--- he’s only unconscious. Ratigan is so relieved that he kisses the wound, his lips smeared with blood, his nose buried deep in Basil’s short, sandy fur. He kisses Basil as well, half-hoping he’ll wake in the midst of it, but the detective is quite soundly under. *
...Just, how much he cares in this scene, and how you wrote, was just so heart wrenching, and god the man let his savage side take control and killed one of his boys cause he THOUGHT he had hurt basil... I loved it.
And along with that part, I know that Ratigan was checking the wood, but I noticed he didnt linger to much after he was sure that Basil would recover. And I just had to think...This was not the first time he has seen his little constables torso and chest, he would have spent longer on just touching him, not even in a sexual matter, I just get the feeling that if Ratigan had never seen the fur covering the most vulnerable part of Basil's body, he'd have spent longer just touching the fur to engrave the feel of it into his mind, not unlike the scent and 5taste of Tobacco ;)
Altogether a lovely chapter, I even swooned just a bit over trading the a ring ( Claadagh ring = a traditional Irish ring given as a token of friendship, love, as an engagement ring and as a wedding ring)for his cigarette box :)
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