End of Part One
I've been thinking about it the last couple of days, and at first, what I was going to do was continue to write and post the story here. However, after brainstorming and outlining the remainder of the chapters, I realized that there isn't really that much left for me to write
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It’s like running down a hill, this angled ground that breaks gravity into shards and each broken piece presses on your back, forcing you until your shoulders begin to move over your running feet, and you feel yourself falling. Gravity takes hold, and it’s impossible to stop -- even if you wanted to save yourself from everything that you know it will bring.
This made me stop breathing there for a sec.
And the whole final sequence...whoa. I say sequence because this whole thing has been cinematic (along with the rest of your fics). The way you describe things, the pace you use...it's unlike anything I've ever read before. I can literally see all of this happening on a film screen. The way you cut between the B/J in bed and Brian being sentenced was masterful.
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Thanks for commenting/leaving feedback, it always makes me happy.
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No! Not at all. This is just another element of why I love your work so much. When you did the trailer for Basements, I went nuts because the whole thing was just as I had imagined. I'm glad you get what I'm saying though about the film connections. I keep wanting to say, "That was great parallel editing" or something like that.
BTW...You know that LJ's been a pain in the ass lately. I left a message for you on my page about Treble Charger (loving em!), but I don't know if you've seen it yet.
You uploaded one of the songs twice so the last one in the first album you posted is wrong. That sounds really confusing. Track 12 came up twice so I need Track 13. Better?
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And sorry about that! I'll reupload the track now, and comment again when it's done.
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treble charger - Left Feeling Odd
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