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Nov 10, 2005 06:28

This is what I was going to do originally - update the fic as I wrote it. So better to start late than never, right? Anyway, here's the next part, I figured I'd post it before I go to work. If you haven't read the other thing I posted this morning, make sure you do that now, else this won't make sense. Okay. This also includes the very first ( Read more... )

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_alicesprings November 10 2005, 14:34:51 UTC

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wordsalone November 10 2005, 15:10:32 UTC
She never answers, and the car never comes back.

*Sniffles*

Justin had felt a lot like that too, warning alarms going off inside of his head, screaming at him, loud alerts that repeatedly told him: don’t do it, don’t do it.

But he did anyways.

And thank goodness he did! Woo-hoo!!

If he were thinking more clearly, he might label it ‘Thing One, Part B’, after the initial case.

Ha. I love that.

Because it’s just… this thing.
And right now, that’s okay.

You get another happy sigh for that one.

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erraticonstilts November 10 2005, 16:38:15 UTC
i love this.

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anneliz_a November 10 2005, 16:42:05 UTC
Whee, first flashback! :D
So, Justin's dad presumably hit him, a terrified Justin ran away, and when he came back an year later, his parents weren't where he left them anymore.
And then he started hustling.
God, poor kid.

Brian is so confused about the kiss, it's even too funny. Now he's just trying to not over-analyze everything and become crazy. Hope he succeeds :D

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shadownyc November 10 2005, 17:07:33 UTC
The flashback was so sad.

Keep updating and I'll be ready to keep reading! :D

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