[Fic] The Beach Trip

[coley_merrin]

Title: The Beach Trip
Pairing: Donghae/Henry, ninja!Zhou Mi/Kyuhyun
Rating: PG-13
Genre: AU, fluff

Summary: Of all the things the prospect of a beach trip had made him anticipate, a crush wasn’t one of them.

Comments

[poisonpickles]

"The first time Donghae sat down beside Henry during a meal, Henry had nearly apologized like he’d done something wrong."
I had to stop and giggle and coo at this part for a good minute before continuing. IT'S JUST SO CUTE ;;

Everything is cute ohmygoodness. Like Kyuhyun and Henry's relationship and the spoon gesture and the abominable sandman and Henry just being Henry. AND DONGHAE'S BUTT SQUEEZE-INDUCED PEANUT BUTTER AND CHOCOLATE SOUND. Oh. Wait. That's not part of the cute. That's part of the jgdlhaskdjl;f;jldjfsmhkld,.

Every part of this is perfect with the development of their relationship and the cute little shenanigans going on everywhere and your wonderful writing ogod how do I write like you please teach me T__T

Thank you for writing this you are the best ;__; ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

[coley_merrin]

I just imagine their little shifting maneuvers, Henry's eyes going wide. XD;;; Ah. These two.

Henry and Kyuhyun amuse me to no end so I'm so glad you liked that part of it. XD The different ways everyone gets along makes me want to squish them. ;A; ...And Hyukjae would look very nice covered in sand. >.> The house of never ending chaos and fun. XD

/sits beside you and watches you write and cheers you on~~ :) :)

I'm just really so so happy you enjoyed it~! ;A; You're so very welcome~ :) <3

[piggybunny12]

Peanut butter and chocolate shavings--haha! Super cute :) :)

[coley_merrin]

I'm sure Donghae could elicit that response in just about anyone. XD~~ /pets them both

Thank you~~! <3

[anonymous]

henhae at the beach is a dream come true ;; you have my heart, please take good care of it. ♥

[coley_merrin]

/gives you some of mine as well~ <3 I will do my best to take care of it, my very best~! They would be amazingly adorable running around together. <3<3

[acornmama]

Omg I missed this sweet piece of lovliness. Crushes are the best! And I was pretty sure Donghae was flirting, so yeah they were going around in silly funny circles. Luv! The QMi. That moment of quiet was awesome. Such a neat little part and I ate it up and read it again and again. :)
And you somewhere in there was Youngwoon. My heart is happy.

[village]

This is the perfect summer fic. Henhae's my weakness and you write them so true to form. This fic was a bubble of happiness.