Comments | coley_merrin: [Fic] Extracts (EXO prompt fill ficlets)

coley_merrin

[Fic] Extracts (EXO prompt fill ficlets)

Mar 21, 2013 01:38

Title: Extracts (four ficlets ( Read more... )

Comments 4

g_odalisque13 March 21 2013, 12:06:51 UTC

i read the first three on your tumblr and i loved them!
xiuhan!!! there is not enough of them! why are they so rare?? ;;
oh my god. anything with chanyeol and puppies is spectacularly adorable.
i loved the baekyeol! so cute! hyperactive chanyeol XD

and then the baekris!

Baekhyun’s fists tightened at the low promise in Kris’s voice. “Please. Please don’t stop touching me. Please.”
“I won’t,” Kris promised. And took him to the edge.
djfhkjerg well then

“Smug,” Kris said, but it wasn’t an admonishment as he kissed the back of Baekhyun’s shoulder and moved off of him.
why is this line cute? idek

baekris feels!
all the feels!
<3

acornmama March 21 2013, 18:26:03 UTC

I know I read the fanservice one before, but heck if I remember where. Or when? Still love it. The hesitancy even though he wanted.
These all are of those first falling in love moments... the best kind.
Of course Kris and Baekhyun have that love that makes you go oooh. Yeah. Solid. Continuing, Beautiful.

senpaimitsuji March 25 2013, 23:54:43 UTC

holy shit /the twins/

yumi_maki May 6 2013, 21:00:49 UTC

I really liked these, especially the first three. The XiuHan one was so well crafted - it felt very real and natural and I think you portray their feelings, especially XiuMin's very realistically. The Suho/Chanyeol was absolutely adorable and sweet and just full of warm fuzzies. As was the BaekYeol. I think your writing is lovely. In just a few short paragraphs, you manage to conjure up worlds that are easy to imagine and that's a talent indeed. Good job.