[Fic] Angel in the Garden

[coley_merrin]

Title: Angel in the Garden
Pairing: Zhou Mi/Kyuhyun
Rating: PG-13
Genre: AU

Prompt: Zhou Mi is an angel or spirit or something that fell from the sky or somehow stumbled upon Kyuhyun. Hasn't a clue about anything in the human world so Kyuhyun has to look after him.

Comments

[coley_merrin]

/TAKES A MOMENT TO SMUSH MIMI IN GIF. The fact that being so cutesy embarrasses him is just...ridiculously adorable. ;;;

I remembered your comment about Mi not knowing how to work clocks, etc, from before. XD XD At least he's not the destructive kind of curious where he takes everything apart, haha~ Kyu probably thought he was trying to toddler-proof his life for a little while as Mi learned. Drink stuff from the fridge, yes. Drink stuff under the sink NO.

I was actually rolling around on the couch when I was writing him kissing his finger, too. Zhou Mi, the most adorable little copycat learning how to be human~ <3<3

[murrc4]

Read this at four in the morning. Sigh. Nobody writes Qmi like you - nobody. Just. Yes.

“The TV says we’ll know when is right,” Zhou Mi said, and squeezed him. Hilarious. Poor Zhou Mi getting love advice from the television.

As always, thank you for giving us such beautiful Qmi.

[coley_merrin]

You sound like me~ (Unless you were just getting up at 4...occasionally I'm just sleeping, then. XD)

At least with him getting friends online, he might get some real life advice~ Though Kyu might have to monitor him for being TOO trusting for a while. XD

It's really my pleasure~~ <3<3

[acornmama]

Is this the longer one you have been working on? This was beautiful. Kyuhyun is so good at taking care of Zhou Mi. And yet giving him the space to be who /what he needs to be. To be so in love with him. To be in love together.
Oh those wings.To protect Kyuhyun in and to hold him and keep him safe. And didn't I have the most wonderful feeling even at the thought of them lingering even as a reflection to remind them both.
Loooooove it!

[coley_merrin]

It is the longer one~~ It ended up the longest of the prompts~~ It's almost like Mi kind of brings Kyu out of his shell a bit? So insulated at times, and Zhou Mi just sort of teases him into the light~ A house full of Mimi laughter ;~~~; Just wanting to be so close to Kyuhyun and waiting for the invitation to know he could stay. I wibbled as I was writing. Sigh.

Oh yes. Even from the moment Kyuhyun's phone startled him, Zhou Mi was using his wings to protect. XD Cocoon of Zhou Mi's love~~ I really hope they framed that picture <3<3

[anonymous]

LOVELY QMI fic

i love the development of their story...the ending was surprised though that was probably because i was expecting more..

but still LOVE IT!!!..me'mng this..

[coley_merrin]

<3<3~~ Yes, it did end before it got deeper into their story. :( But knowing they would be happy at least~ <3 But then, I couldn't let it end any other way~ <3<3

I'm glad you enjoyed it~~ :D

[g_odalisque13]

oh my god this was so sweet
i am pretty sure i've just melted into goo
zhou mi as an angel djgnvjkdf so perfect
and him having to learn everything and how everything worked was so adorble, especially with kyuhyun trying to help how he could
i imagine it'd be a bit awkward to talk about the prospect of having sex while trying on clothes though XD but even that was cute lol
i'm totally supposed to be writing but i can't get started b/c it's smut and sometimes i feel like the room is judging me which makes me sound insane so... OTL but this was quite frankly much more entertaining
ugh so sweet
/continues to melt

[coley_merrin]

I can just imagine him with a stack of manuals trying out each function for electronics. XD At least he wasn't taking them apart~~ (And Kyu making sure he didn't, idk...electrocute or poison himself. XD)

Poor Kyu in his little bubble of being unaware that Zhou Mi might actually want things seeing as he is a man. XD You're not alone, Kyu! XD Now to get it off his mind before they go on that date, haha.

Haha, no, sometimes it does feel like the room is judging you. XD Kick that room! Tell it to stop judging. It must not stand in the way of fun!