[Fic] Someday

Aug 01, 2012 02:27

Title: Someday
Pairing: Suho/Kai
Rating: R
Genre: AU, fluff
Warnings: sexual situations

Request prompt: Tsundere Kai with in-love Suho. Suho trying to leave Kai alone and seeing other people. Kai realising he must overcome his feelings.

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airplanewishes August 1 2012, 10:52:23 UTC
I cried. I don't know why, but the part where Junmyeon was angry with Jongin, by the stop light, where he told him to back off, it started there. And with the candy and Jongin forcing him on a date it just got worse. :( But...happy endings are always happy and I'm glad. Thank you for writing this!!! :D

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coley_merrin August 6 2012, 08:03:55 UTC
Awww ;~~~; That was actually kind of hard to write, because I could feel the frustration there. And even if we couldn't see it from Jongin...his too. :( :( /pets you and gets you tissues and sits with you~~ <3 I love happy endings so much~ <3

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airplanewishes August 6 2012, 13:09:11 UTC
Junmyeon's frustration and his feelings were so clear that I wanted to strangle Jongin sometimes. Like, why are you being like this??? And then I felt frustrated for him too when Junmyeon didn't want to accept him. I love happy endings too and I'm glad this had one. :D /cuddles

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coley_merrin August 7 2012, 05:04:05 UTC
;;; Yes. Just giving a little, Jongin! But hardest thing. ;;;; I know I'd have it almost impossible to admit anything myself, but I'm much more like Suho in-fic in that I'm ridiculously transparent. XD

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junjou_robotica August 1 2012, 12:46:29 UTC
gbjknbgrnjkrbgjnkbgrjnkbrgnjbgnjbrgjnbnjkbr so cute so cute. stupid obtuse Jongin...poor confused Junmyeonnieeeeee~

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coley_merrin August 6 2012, 08:39:20 UTC
Jongin really had to get kicked out of his comfort zone, and out of waiting. ;;;; a;ldjfa. Suho. /cuddles him forever~~ <3<3

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kwonmisun August 1 2012, 17:56:44 UTC
I'm grinning. I love this. You, woman, are making me fall more in love with EXO.

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coley_merrin August 6 2012, 08:42:40 UTC
They are the cutest little tiny talented babies~ They are keeping me occupied while missing Zhou Mi like crazy~ XD (and making grabby hands at all the news of him~) I'm so glad you enjoyed it~ :D

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kitschful August 2 2012, 00:31:44 UTC
WIBBLES FOREVER ;;;;;;;;; <3

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coley_merrin August 6 2012, 08:42:50 UTC
/wibbles back at you ;~~~;

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precious_0ne August 2 2012, 04:54:33 UTC
Sodary here! (with Rachel somewhere in the background, who read this fic before me, but still pretends she doesn't exist and won't write to you.)

This morning, I stopped breathing when I saw your message! I couldn't believe that it was done. SUKAI! MY OTP! OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG!

but the way that his hair had been coifed just so on the first day he'd come to work.

Rachel says you used the perfect word to describe Kai's hairstyle!

I must say that I didn't get into the story until Kai's "pat" to Suho's butt, but all the events that happened after Kai's change of behaviour made me appreciate the subtlety of the beginning. I didn't think that tsundere could be so realistic. Once I had a global idea of Kai's behaviour, I could pick up the tsundere characteristics, and you're awesome at describing them!

"Doctor, can it be saved?" he asked lightly, stepping closer.I SEE WHAT YOU DID THERE, AND THAT WAS CRUEL! I know you wrote the beginning last, so we HAD mentioned doctor!SuKai already!!! Kai, the computer doctor ( ... )

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precious_0ne August 2 2012, 04:54:52 UTC
The candy! AND YOUR USE OF BAEKYEOL! YES! BAEKYEOL! I love how Baekhyun is the gossip (princess... Baekhyun is a princess for me), and rational Chanyeol! I love it when he gets surprisingly reasonable!

"Tell them that we didn't sleep together," he said, pinning Jongin with a stare. It wasn't a friendly tone. It was the most boss-like tone he possessed.

"We didn't sleep together," Jongin agreed.

"Now, tell them that we're not dating."

"We're not dating," Jongin said, and Joonmyun nearly relaxed. "Yet."

Any other time and his brain would've shut down. But right then, it filled with steam.

"No, not 'yet.' Never," he barked, making the other three almost jump. "Never!"

"I think your boyfriend is upset with you," he heard behind him as he stalked away.Yet. YET. KAI, WHY ARE YOU SO SUAVE?! Did I tell you how much I love that the whole office ships them and think they're canon ( ... )

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coley_merrin August 6 2012, 09:48:23 UTC
Baekhyun, haha. Yes, Chanyeol has to be the voice of reason sometimes. He's fun to write off the handle, but he's a smart cookie who cares. XD And obviously, Baekhyun does as well. I can see him and Kyungsoo cooking up things together, with Kyungsoo a bit in despair. XD ( ... )

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precious_0ne August 7 2012, 23:59:00 UTC
The Suho you keep reblogging keeps killing me by the way. I'm surprised you're still alive!

I usually write from Kai's POV, so I was surprised to read Suho's POV, but it was a nice change! I always imagine Kai to have a lot of feels (like us, fans affected by Suho) and forget about Suho's thoughts. I recently reread an old interview in which it was mentioned that Suho used to take Kai on dates out to eat and that Kai finally saw him as a caring hyung, and that they got close really fast. Those two T.T ( ... )

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