Comments | coley_merrin: [Fic] The Air I Breathe

coley_merrin

[Fic] The Air I Breathe - 1/7

Aug 29, 2009 11:38

Title: The Air I Breathe
Author: Coley Merrin
Rating: R overall
Pairings: Siwon/Hankyung
Also Featuring: Zhou Mi/Kyuhyun
Genre: AU, fantasy, angst, romance

Summary: Caught between two worlds, Siwon must find a way to save not only himself, but the jaguar spirit whose life hangs in the balance.

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pairing: qmi, fic: theairibreathe, fic: animalverse, pairing: sihan, fic: super junior

Comments 66

followurdestiny August 29 2009, 18:45:43 UTC

Spot *will be back, eventually*

followurdestiny September 1 2009, 20:22:54 UTC

ha, I just read the whole Qmi story, and now I started to read this one... I'm so sucked into this world you created!
And the ritual gets a translation in this one... but they came back to early! and the bird came back with them >_< ... oh oh...
*runs to read the next chapter* ♥♥

breeen August 29 2009, 19:11:44 UTC

OMG! totally gasped out loud. be back. :)

breeen August 29 2009, 19:29:28 UTC

GAH!

(so I totally have to leave soon, and was like... make up and looking good vs. Shihan Animalverse. you can tell which one won. :P)

OMG. totally expected the same story but with Shihan instead of KyuMi (which would have been fine) BUT DANG. TWIST. so good.

so, how often do you post... cuz like I need to balance out my days. hahahah... If I check a bajillion times every day, I'll go nuts. But is there a day that you plan to post the next ch?

I'm being demanding and long-winded, and I didn't really even give you good comments, because I'm still like 0_0! :)

coley_merrin August 29 2009, 19:57:03 UTC

The same story probably would've still been interesting with different events and whatever... But harder for me, I think... Trying not to kill people with boredom. But yeah. XD I wanted something a little different.

I try to post on an every-other-day schedule when I start. (Though I still have as yet to figure out if that's too close together.) So barring craziness, Monday will probably be the next chapter. :)

Finally getting to it! \o/ :D Thank you~

breeen August 30 2009, 04:25:05 UTC

yes! way to make mondays better! :) *is excited* :) do you have the whole thing done already? that's impressive. :)

racaiaeru August 29 2009, 19:27:20 UTC

Spot. So excited, eeeee~ :D

racaiaeru August 29 2009, 19:43:43 UTC

OMG YAY. <3

I was kinda wondering if this would be the same as the Qmi, except with different names, and I was like, hmm. Will she do that, or will she change it? And you changed it, and I'm so happy, you have no idea. :D and now Geng can't breathe without Siwon touching him, which is very very nice indeed, but could pose a few problems. And now the bird is human? Did it get it's own body, or did it just take over someone else's?

Since you posted the first chapter, does this mean you're done writing? And can I be excited and expect a new chapter soon, please? Haha. XD

Off to read again... A very exciting start, thank you! <3

coley_merrin August 29 2009, 20:01:59 UTC

It could have been done... Some way, somehow. But this way... getting to expand a little. <3 (And add in some KyuMi haha.) Very nice but with problems... I couldn't have said it better. XD And the bird took over someone. >.>

I'm allllmost done. I'd say about 90%. Done enough that I feel comfortable starting to post. :D Next chap should be up Monday. <3

\o/ Thank you~

mardigrasmaven August 29 2009, 19:51:34 UTC

Spot! I'm so happy this is posted!

mardigrasmaven August 29 2009, 22:43:17 UTC

OMFG IT'S SO DAMN GOOD!! I was wondering how it would play out differently and from the moment Siwon is there, it deviates in possibly some of the worst ways possible. He's already messed up the ritual and now that they're in Korea, not only is Hangeng completely dependent on contact from Siwon to survive, THE GODDAMN BIRD CAME THROUGH TOO AND HAS POSSESSED SOMEONE OMFG!!

I honestly can't wait for Two. I'm so excited, you just don't know. ♥

coley_merrin August 30 2009, 05:03:10 UTC

Yeeeah, way to go Siwonnie, getting your mouth in places it shouldn't be... XD Very dependent... Oh Geng.

That bird. _-_ Oh that bird.

<3 Monday! :D Thank you~

kimiri_elric August 29 2009, 19:57:51 UTC

OMG OMG OMG!!!! This is amazing!!! I am so glad that you are doing another one besides the KyuMi. The KyuMi was so good. I love this concept!! Dude I could like hug you right now!! Ok I am calm, and a average normal person.

coley_merrin August 30 2009, 05:05:22 UTC

<3 <3 I had to... XD I really wanted to continue with another pairing. <3

And that's okay. I'm definitely not average or normal, haha. XD

<3 Thank you~