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alobear February 5 2011, 09:55:29 UTC
I love this! Especially the last line. :o)

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coldjwplay February 16 2011, 21:22:57 UTC
Thanks! I think this is now one of my favourite of my poems, and I too like that cheeky last line a lot.

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aster13 February 5 2011, 11:07:30 UTC
Ee, i liked this :) I often write poems on trains.

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coldjwplay February 16 2011, 21:23:35 UTC
Thanks! As we've discussed before, trains and train stations are quirky places that are perfect for narratives of all kinds.

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