Flowers

Sep 15, 2008 22:07

Title: Flowers
Fandom: NCIS
Characters: Gibbs (mentions of basically everyone else)
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Death fic
Spoilers: Everything up to Judgement Day
Summary: Every year on Christmas Gibbs visited the graves of his deceased loved ones.
A/N: Big thanks to my amazing (and I mean really epically amazing - she got this back to me about an hour and a ( Read more... )

writing, fanfiction, ncis

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lil_jei September 16 2008, 02:42:13 UTC
Wow was that possinly the most beautiful yet depressing fic I have read in the NCIS fandom for the longest time. The flower metaphor flowed and fit into the story so perfectly. I could see every scene in my head and that's a mark of one hell of a fic/literary work :)

I certainly felt every death as it was described and I can sadly see that Gibbs the stubborn bastard that he is could be the last one standing etc.

Loved it.

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cold_ember_32 September 16 2008, 15:24:16 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm glad that liked it!

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emsworth3 September 16 2008, 03:26:29 UTC
Oh, this hurt so good! I was in tears by the end, I could feel Gibbs' anguish as it grew with each death. Beautiful story.

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cold_ember_32 September 16 2008, 15:25:32 UTC
*hands you a tissue* Thanks! I glad that you enjoyed reading it!

Also, your icon is too funny!

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emsworth3 September 17 2008, 00:48:49 UTC
Yes, that is my lovely cat Abby. She's the only cat I know who sticks her tongue out, I don't understand it but am amused by it!

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mylogiceatsyou September 16 2008, 04:26:06 UTC
I just read this over on fanfiction.net, and it is just as sad and yet lovely the second time.

The bit about Tony having seen this film, the black roses that Abby will give to no one else...

All so beautiful.

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cold_ember_32 September 16 2008, 15:26:52 UTC
Thank you! It's always nice to hear that one of my fics merits rereading!

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tashira_ronin September 16 2008, 10:38:04 UTC
You made me cry *sniffle*
Beautifully written and a believable capturing of the "straw"

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cold_ember_32 September 16 2008, 15:27:26 UTC
*hands you a tissue*

Thanks!

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plutos_revenge September 16 2008, 11:26:56 UTC
What a beautiful, heartbreaking fic. Stunning

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cold_ember_32 September 16 2008, 15:27:59 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm glad that you liked it!

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lil_jei September 17 2008, 03:44:43 UTC
So a quick interuption of the review flow...I love "the hands" icon you have going on...very cool, it's Eastern Promises right?

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cold_ember_32 September 17 2008, 03:48:33 UTC
Thanks... and yep, it is Eastern Promises (I really love that movie... :)

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