drabblicious

Aug 20, 2009 00:28

Title: none
Pairing: Morgan/Reid
Warnings: none really, unless language offends you that much. and, as usual, this is hugely unbeta-ed, and tremendously fragmentary.
Notes:  for luckinfovely , who requested:
1. Reid cheating
2. Morgan and Reid's biggest fight.

...I'm not sure this succeeds in fulfilling either of those.  here's hoping.

There are a million ways this could have ended )

drabble, writing, criminal minds, fiction

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luckinfovely August 20 2009, 11:52:34 UTC
oh my fucking god. you would post this while I'm in Chicago and can only reply by phone. fjhfhdhdhfu

this. is. glorious. better than anything I could have imagined. and I already had complete faith in your ficcing skillz.

I. LOVE.

best possible way to start the day.

expect more spam when I return to my laptop. omg.

glorious. for real.

<333

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luckinfovely August 20 2009, 11:54:33 UTC
oh Jesus.
also: THANK YOU. omgsomuch.
want a thank you Drabble once I'm done killing Morgan?

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cold_clarity August 21 2009, 03:06:14 UTC
ahahaha, I love the things you do to my ego.

and a thank you drabble for my thank you drabble? yes please, ma'am.

I hope chicago didn't kill you.

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luckinfovely August 21 2009, 03:10:21 UTC
AND I MEANT EVERY WORD.

also, i will squee at you in greater length once i've had some "sleep," i swear. AHAHASLEEPWHATISTHAT. but first!:

so what do you want?! *taptaptap*

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luckinfovely August 22 2009, 20:01:28 UTC
I said I would return to spam, and it may have taken me forever, but HERE I AM.

Okay.

OKAY.

I loved this. No, really. LOVED. I loved what you did with the prompt, I loved the dialogue, the characters (who were SO themselves), and I really loved the way this was written. It was fragmented and brutal, just like Morgan's thoughts, and it was all PERFECT AND LOVELY.

And now, I snippet:

Before the door closes and Reid doesn't call his name.

OH, MY AND OW. Yeah, that is over. Damn.

He isn't drunk when Reid comes home (comes back? Just comes to the apartment--because god knows this isn't their home anymore).

I love that. That he's sober & SO HURT (sorry, Morgan, but really), and OMG THE HOME THING. The pain. I love it when he suffers. It makes me a horrible person, but I just DO. Not my fault he does it so well.

There's a funny ringing sound in Morgan's ears and a churning in his stomach and his hand still smarts in red-webbed bursts while he feels the world unravel around him.You win at vivid imagery & lovely descriptiveness. For ( ... )

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luckinfovely August 22 2009, 20:01:51 UTC
"You're my whole world, kid."

Which is 1) SO Morgan; and 2) I suspect is at least 5% true, even in canon. Reid is the only team member I couldn't see Morgan surviving without being fucked up beyond repair. It would be all "I FAILED" and drinking and meaningless sex to keep his mind off things. More than usual, even. There's just something not entirely heterosexual about their love for each other. I mean, Morgan -- who has always struck me as somewhat homophobic (LIKE WITH THE "HOPE IT WAS A SHE" COMMENT IN THAT ONE EP, WHICH REALLY MADE ME LOATHE HIM JUST A LITTLE FOR A LONG, LONG TIME BECAUSE GOD SUCH.A.PRICK. -- calling Reid "pretty boy"? REALLY? And Reid's big googly cow eyes for Morgan & the way Morgan's just about the ONLY person who can touch him -- including ALMOST!STOMACH!PATTING -- without Reid being all "OMGHANDS!DON'TTOUCHMEGROSS." Seriously ( ... )

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cold_clarity August 22 2009, 22:53:48 UTC
ahahahaha I love you so much. honestly. your enthusiasm is so spectacular and it means SO MUCH, because I'm constantly doubtful over the quality of everything I write. so yes, thank you thank you all the way into forever.

also, regarding this:
I need to write a crack!fic wherein vaguely!straight!Reid has a HIGHLY explicit sex dream about violently!straight!Morgan, and then can't look him in the eye for WEEKS.

....that? you should do that. and end it with a WE-DON'T-KNOW-WHAT-WE'RE-DOING sloppy!makeout moment in the coffee room, leaving them both embarrassed and confused and wanting more.

it's probably how they'd get together anyway.

There's just something not entirely heterosexual about their love for each other.I agree so intensely with this statement. and yeah, Morgan does strike me as the homophobic type. I hypothesize that he's probably bisexual with a tendency towards women and that his sexual attraction for men is probably buried under his jock-star-ladies'-man persona and he's hella afraid to confront it ( ... )

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cold_clarity August 22 2009, 22:55:56 UTC
oh ALSO. stop worrying about accidental plagiarism. I have total faith that you'd never steal anything from me with any cruel intention and if something you happen to write resembles some minutiae in something I wrote well then...that's how writing works, you know? I'm pretty sure 90% of what I write is probably the product of some long-buried memories of stuff I read five years (or more) ago.

le sigh.

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