'crack in the ceiling' - [Uruha/Kai, etc] 2/?

Aug 15, 2012 00:42


Title: crack in the ceiling
Chapter:  2/?
Description: In which Kai promises him as he watches his eyes bleed into silver, “You were happy once.”
Pairings: Kai/Uruha, Aoi/Ruki, Reita/Ruki
Genre: Drama, romance, supernatural
Notes:  For uruai's KU Summer Challenge :D

twisted hands )

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colberry August 20 2012, 22:17:18 UTC
Oh my god. Thank you. Thank you so, so much! You seriously leave me breathless with your comments and this one is no exception. You’re way too kind to me ;u;

I’m glad I got the tension across - I was writing it with a rigid spine and hunched shoulders the entire time. And I’ve always found handwriting fascinating, especially how you can’t “fake” it. There’s always a semblance of “you” in it no matter what, so I figured that would be an excellent way to show how Ruki is a strong, real presence inside of Takanori. And of course, there is the songwriter characteristic we know him for :D

I’m so, so happy that you like the portrayal of split personalities here ;A; I’m very interested in the concept, mostly to do with how the GazettE have these “stage personas” and so I had to do my own take of it xD You always point things out, though, that I never noticed before - such as how most fics “keep one locked away forever to resume a normal life”. I honestly didn’t even pick up on that whilst I was reading split personality fics, but I’m so glad that my take was fresh in your eyes :)

Thank you SO much again! For everything. Your words always inspire me to write more and improve ♥

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