'crack in the ceiling' - [Uruha/Kai, etc] 2/?

[colberry]

Title: crack in the ceiling
Chapter:  2/?
Description: In which Kai promises him as he watches his eyes bleed into silver, “You were happy once.”
Pairings: Kai/Uruha, Aoi/Ruki, Reita/Ruki
Genre: Drama, romance, supernatural
Notes:  For uruai's KU Summer Challenge :D

Comments

[sarky_chepooka]

I don't think I've EVER loved a story so much after reading only two chapters as I do this - not fan fiction, not "real" fiction by published authors, nothing. This was so intense that I literally had to take breaks while reading it. Also because I didn't want the chapter to end.

I'm already completely in love with Takanori/Ruki. While it's not something I really know much about, I think schizophrenia is an interesting subject in fiction, and it just makes me even more excited about reading this.

After reading the first chapter, I really just wanted Takanori and Aoi to get together, so Aoi could stop being so miserable. But now there's Reita and I like him too, but there's also

'the low and crooning pleas of Aoi-Aoi-Aoi' aaaand

...now I don't know what I'm hoping for anymore. This is one of those fics where I'll just lean back and enjoy reading it, because I have no clue what to expect. And I like that.

And Kai, of course. But while I kinda-sorta understand what he can do and what happened, I feel like it's too soon for me to say anything other than I like him, I adored the beginning with him and Takanori/Ruki, and I can't wait to read more about him.

I feel like I always gush about your writing so much it almost becomes slightly ridiculous, but every word is my honest opinion. Consider me a devoted fangirl xD

Needless to say, I'm loving this, and I look forward to the next chapter! - Sorry this comment is so lengthy ^^;

[colberry]

Oh.. Oh, thank you so much! You've really left me speechless - your words really mean so much to me, especially since I've been feeling insecure about this fic (since it's supernatural and all). Really, thank you so much. I'm so, so glad you're enjoying it so far!

I've always found the concept of 'real' versus 'persona' in the GazettE very interesting. I would love to write more fics delving into that idea :D Haha, yes it's a very messy triangle of lust between those three (or is it four, with Ruki? >:3). I'm not sure who ends up with who at this point so we'll just have to see~

And it's not ridiculous at all! I really appreciate all the kind words you send me ;u; You're way too kind ♥