'wide shut' - [Aoi/Uruha] 1/1

[colberry]

Title:  wide shut
Pairing:  Aoi/Uruha
Genre:  Drama, romance
Notes:  Written between 1AM and 2AM.

Synopsis: Because Aoi still presses his lips to Uruha’s shoulder when it’s over, mouthing hushed constellations into each freckle.

Comments

[yurinie]

Okay this.

You know, it's afternoon in my country right now, and the sickening temperature doesn't make reading intense angst any better. Just. WHAT DID YOU DO TO ME WOMAN. absdbvdbvvvgdzfbvd ;_;

dark, dark,

brown - warm,

gasping his name

- Uruha kisses them shut

Some like your first lines, i like your last- they always make me realize something. It's not like closing a door completely but let it loosely open; so you can look through and maybe, if you look close enough, you'll find the other side of the string, an answer, deep down where all the twists tie /is rambling. It's just how i feel JUST IGNORE ME XD

Aoi seems to flicker as he stares at the tears in his hands, breath heavy, before he starts pushing at Uruha’s shoulders. But the alcohol is still in his bones and he’s left clutching at Uruha’s shoulder blades, squeezing so tight like maybe he could crack them apart and release crooked wings.

There isn't so many of my, ultimate favourite lines in this one, but you definitely have a way with words-- all beautiful and poetic, i just can't help but flail all over. WELL WELL WELL ANGST. YOU KNOW WHAT THAT MEANS. I'M AN ANGST FREAK. /hides

Overall, as always this was well-written, really well-written ! Sometimes midnight and early morning could work something out of our heads X'D

And just so you know, stalking your Twitter turns out to be a good thing ;)

[colberry]

Oh, thank you so much! I'm so happy you enjoyed this one :D

I adore reading punch-in-the-gut ending lines so I've always tried to kinda reach for that. Plus, open-endings are my favorite :3

Haha, and that's good to hear! I try not to have my twitter be too boring or spazz-tastic :D